Critique the Locker room comic
12 years ago
So tell me do you like where it is going? Are there any suggestions you would like to throw in there on what to do next? Anything i could do better on future pages or comics?
It will be reaching the end soon.
Adult Gay Comic
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10000076/
It will be reaching the end soon.
Adult Gay Comic
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10000076/

Zivox
~zivox
i really like it.

ShadeKat
~shadekat
OP
^.^ thank you

Soro
~soro
hey there I just stumbled across this while looking for rabbits ^_^ anyway I thought it was pretty good. I think you do pretty well with your body language and the expressions on your character's faces and it goes a long way. I might suggest changing up the perspective a little more since most of your panels keep everyone in profile, but perspective is difficult and I'm not the best at it either. Anyway Id be interested in seeing more from you. keep at it