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12 years ago
Just something I thought would be fun to try
Character: Minty Candy
Name:
[ ] Is it your real name? (+5)
[ ] Is it your real nickname?(+3)
[X] Is it a pony name at all? (+2)
[X] Does it have to do with their cutie mark? (-2)
Appearance:
[x] Does it have a canon character's mane? (+2) ((I suppose it’s kind of Derpy’s style, but that’s a fairly generic style, I’ll say +1))
[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash's? (+4)
[ ] How many colors does its mane have? (+2 for each color past 1)
[ ] Does it sparkle or glitter? (+5)
[X] Unicorn? (+3)
[ ] Pegasus? (+2)
[ ] Earth Pony? (-1)
[ ] Alicorn? (+10)
[ ] Does it's base coat have more than 1 color? (+4 for each extra color, a gradient counts as 1 extra)
[ ] Are its eyes deeply moving to other characters? (+3)
[ ] Are they purple? (+2)
[ ] Are they described in thought out metaphors such as "The fiery red of deep passion" (+3)
[ ] Are they known throughout Equestria for their beauty? (+2)
[X] Are they male? (+1)
[X] Is their occupation something other than scout, guard, or carriage puller? (+1)
Cutie Mark
[ ] Does it ever change? (+10)
[ ] Do they have more than 1 special talent? (+4)
[ ] Does it cover the entire flank? Ex: Luna's (+2)
[ ] Is it something lame and not very impressive? Ex: cleaning windows (-3)
[ ] Is it something totally amazing that nopony else can do? (+2)
[ ] Are they the best at what they do? (+5)
[ ] Is it similar/same in appearance as one of the mane characters? (+3)
Relationships:
[ ] Are they in a romantic relationship? (+3)
[ ] More than one? (+3)
[ ] With a canon character? (+4)
[ ] With Luna or Celestia? (+8)
[ ] With any of the Mane 6? (+4)
[X] Are your character and a mane character friends? (+1) ((Eh, I suppose, they’re in pictures and RPs))
[X] Is it one of the mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Are your character and the Mane 6 pony better friends than she is with the rest of the mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Are they related to a well known/canon/mane character? (+5)
[ ] Is it royalty? (+3)
Personality
[ ] Do they seem to have the same personality as one of the Mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash? (+1)
[ ] Are they extremely nice, and never really do anything wrong? (+3)
[ ] They are loved by everypony? (+5)
[ ] Except one? (+2)
[ ] Are they hated by everypony? (+5)
[ ] Except one? (+1)
[ ] Do they have a serious personality flaw that hinders them significantly? (-6)
Total: +9
0-8 Your character is kind of boring, spice it up a little!
9-12 Well balanced!
13-18 This is good for canon characters, but is really stretching it for an OC
19+ you might have to start over, your character seems to be a little too perfect to be credible.
So Minty’s no Mary Sue/Gary Stew, but I could add some traits to make him more interesting.
Character: Minty Candy
Name:
[ ] Is it your real name? (+5)
[ ] Is it your real nickname?(+3)
[X] Is it a pony name at all? (+2)
[X] Does it have to do with their cutie mark? (-2)
Appearance:
[x] Does it have a canon character's mane? (+2) ((I suppose it’s kind of Derpy’s style, but that’s a fairly generic style, I’ll say +1))
[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash's? (+4)
[ ] How many colors does its mane have? (+2 for each color past 1)
[ ] Does it sparkle or glitter? (+5)
[X] Unicorn? (+3)
[ ] Pegasus? (+2)
[ ] Earth Pony? (-1)
[ ] Alicorn? (+10)
[ ] Does it's base coat have more than 1 color? (+4 for each extra color, a gradient counts as 1 extra)
[ ] Are its eyes deeply moving to other characters? (+3)
[ ] Are they purple? (+2)
[ ] Are they described in thought out metaphors such as "The fiery red of deep passion" (+3)
[ ] Are they known throughout Equestria for their beauty? (+2)
[X] Are they male? (+1)
[X] Is their occupation something other than scout, guard, or carriage puller? (+1)
Cutie Mark
[ ] Does it ever change? (+10)
[ ] Do they have more than 1 special talent? (+4)
[ ] Does it cover the entire flank? Ex: Luna's (+2)
[ ] Is it something lame and not very impressive? Ex: cleaning windows (-3)
[ ] Is it something totally amazing that nopony else can do? (+2)
[ ] Are they the best at what they do? (+5)
[ ] Is it similar/same in appearance as one of the mane characters? (+3)
Relationships:
[ ] Are they in a romantic relationship? (+3)
[ ] More than one? (+3)
[ ] With a canon character? (+4)
[ ] With Luna or Celestia? (+8)
[ ] With any of the Mane 6? (+4)
[X] Are your character and a mane character friends? (+1) ((Eh, I suppose, they’re in pictures and RPs))
[X] Is it one of the mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Are your character and the Mane 6 pony better friends than she is with the rest of the mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Are they related to a well known/canon/mane character? (+5)
[ ] Is it royalty? (+3)
Personality
[ ] Do they seem to have the same personality as one of the Mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash? (+1)
[ ] Are they extremely nice, and never really do anything wrong? (+3)
[ ] They are loved by everypony? (+5)
[ ] Except one? (+2)
[ ] Are they hated by everypony? (+5)
[ ] Except one? (+1)
[ ] Do they have a serious personality flaw that hinders them significantly? (-6)
Total: +9
0-8 Your character is kind of boring, spice it up a little!
9-12 Well balanced!
13-18 This is good for canon characters, but is really stretching it for an OC
19+ you might have to start over, your character seems to be a little too perfect to be credible.
So Minty’s no Mary Sue/Gary Stew, but I could add some traits to make him more interesting.
