Koda's Story - Just a Preview
12 years ago
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So I have been working/ daydreaming on a story i wanna write. Dono when its gonna happen, but here is a little bit of a preview of what to expect. Tell me what you think please =D
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He slowly lifts himself up from the ground and feels the mud mixed by the dirt and blood in his hands. He feels the sweat drip down his brow and the feeling of cuts down his body. He looks up and sees his enemy in the distance, smirking.
“You should just give up. Death will ease your sorrow”
His enemy provokes
“Never”
He says as he lifts himself up and jumps to his feet. He takes his blood stained knuckle blades and hold them tightly.
“Never. I will not give up, I will not surrender, I will not be weak!”
He says as he moves lightning fast to his enemy, it is as if time froze for all but him. He runs faster than the mind can process, with each step he releases more and more energy, powered by his passion and adrenaline. The ground start to break and little craters fall behind him as he starts leaping from space to space, closer to his enemy. He draws his fist with the sharp knuckle blade back and finally when he reaches his foe, lets out a mighty punch. The fight is insane, Kick, jump flip kick, punch cut. They go at each other at a incredible pace. No one stops, no one blinks. His foe with his mighty broadsword skilfully mastering each cut. They miss each other constantly, one blow will be fatal.
His foe tries to slash him but misses. He sees the opportunity and jumps on his foes blade, using his body weight to push it down with incredible strength, then running up and kicking his foe under the chin forming a back flip. He lands on his feet and his foe falls back. He moves fast to his downed enemy and then picks him up.
“I will never give up. I will never surrender. I am Koda”
And with that last word, he throws his enemy into the air and jumps back. Teleports up to him and kicks him higher, then teleports above him and kicks him down to the ground. He then moves quickly to the ground and before his foe can even reach the earth and slams one final punch through his enemies face causing the foe to shatter apart, crumbling into ash. Koda looks as the ash disperses and then looks into the lingering sunset.
“Fucking demons”
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Koda is by me
Kodaw... lol Obviousely
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He slowly lifts himself up from the ground and feels the mud mixed by the dirt and blood in his hands. He feels the sweat drip down his brow and the feeling of cuts down his body. He looks up and sees his enemy in the distance, smirking.
“You should just give up. Death will ease your sorrow”
His enemy provokes
“Never”
He says as he lifts himself up and jumps to his feet. He takes his blood stained knuckle blades and hold them tightly.
“Never. I will not give up, I will not surrender, I will not be weak!”
He says as he moves lightning fast to his enemy, it is as if time froze for all but him. He runs faster than the mind can process, with each step he releases more and more energy, powered by his passion and adrenaline. The ground start to break and little craters fall behind him as he starts leaping from space to space, closer to his enemy. He draws his fist with the sharp knuckle blade back and finally when he reaches his foe, lets out a mighty punch. The fight is insane, Kick, jump flip kick, punch cut. They go at each other at a incredible pace. No one stops, no one blinks. His foe with his mighty broadsword skilfully mastering each cut. They miss each other constantly, one blow will be fatal.
His foe tries to slash him but misses. He sees the opportunity and jumps on his foes blade, using his body weight to push it down with incredible strength, then running up and kicking his foe under the chin forming a back flip. He lands on his feet and his foe falls back. He moves fast to his downed enemy and then picks him up.
“I will never give up. I will never surrender. I am Koda”
And with that last word, he throws his enemy into the air and jumps back. Teleports up to him and kicks him higher, then teleports above him and kicks him down to the ground. He then moves quickly to the ground and before his foe can even reach the earth and slams one final punch through his enemies face causing the foe to shatter apart, crumbling into ash. Koda looks as the ash disperses and then looks into the lingering sunset.
“Fucking demons”
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Koda is by me
Kodaw... lol Obviousely
Kodaw
~kodaw
OP
Mid the grammar
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