A Flurry of Haiku (and a surprise Tanka)
12 years ago
General
gasping for air
where is home now?
the sound of waves
my coat is red
I'm hardly an angel
that damned song
wake up suddenly
kill the dream, look in mirror
dissatisfaction
little canid
where has your tail gone?
tracks in snow
five, seven, then five
like reflections in mirrors
topic and comment
excellent design:
minimal, imperfection
soul of the tanka:
efficient, ambiguous
one is both, and neither one
multitudes of worlds
locked inside a broken box
ashes that were me
where is home now?
the sound of waves
my coat is red
I'm hardly an angel
that damned song
wake up suddenly
kill the dream, look in mirror
dissatisfaction
little canid
where has your tail gone?
tracks in snow
five, seven, then five
like reflections in mirrors
topic and comment
excellent design:
minimal, imperfection
soul of the tanka:
efficient, ambiguous
one is both, and neither one
multitudes of worlds
locked inside a broken box
ashes that were me
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