Poem: The Journey part I
17 years ago
Through the wild wood
Where I gather my food
Collecting for the coming year
And storing it in here
I journey out on a trip
And I ask my friend for a tip
He told me to always look forward and ahead
And never to let the animals take your bread
That’s all I had bread and bow
And the arrows on my back you know
So off I went with a satchel on my back
And I hoped that I have enough in my pack
I find a spot and camped for the night
And I set my pack down with all my might
The tent went up and my mat went down
And I went to bed on the cold hard ground
Where I gather my food
Collecting for the coming year
And storing it in here
I journey out on a trip
And I ask my friend for a tip
He told me to always look forward and ahead
And never to let the animals take your bread
That’s all I had bread and bow
And the arrows on my back you know
So off I went with a satchel on my back
And I hoped that I have enough in my pack
I find a spot and camped for the night
And I set my pack down with all my might
The tent went up and my mat went down
And I went to bed on the cold hard ground

velnor
~velnor
is not bad, but i would point out it doesnt all have to rhyme, you can capture a little more emotion using other poem methids, but im not saying i dont like it, cause i do ^^