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comic idea, if any one can draw let me known.
12 years ago
oky day second comic in a nutshell. first page is a gritty black and white flashback, you see a female in a hasmat suit back to you setting down what appears to be a barrel; of waste your view is through the eyes of something k9 watching her. second pannel her lighting a cigerette and a side view of the k9(you now see is a furry dog in nothing but pants) he is almost on top of her and looks menecing a bulge in his pants. next panel him pinning her down to the barrel bulge against her butt her screaming. third pannel (your chioce) either her getting rapped or black pannel(or her face scared and crying) her screaming stop. next page is her with a very deformed baby(half human half furry) and her crying and wondering how this happened(genetics dont work). next pannel her being told by the doctor that the radation from the barrel got on her and muted her genes making the child possible. third pannel her leaving the hospitle and getting getting yelled at by the people on the street that her child is an abomonation and a freak. fourth pannel her getting run out of town by a mob throwing things at her.
next page is her and the child slightly grown up living in the gutters. second pannel is her son asking why they live in the gutters and her saying the world thinks he is a freak.third pannel is him asking her if she thinks so too, her answering that he is her son and she loves him even if he is different.next page is modern in all color the child now grown in an abanded building looking out the window at furries passing by and scorning them. next pannel is him somewhere else in the building working on some sort of device muttering about the "furry scum".third pannel is him throwing the wretch and laughing crazy like. fourth pannel him dragging the device up the stairs laughing about killing them all.
next page you see cuddlesmuch(black lab fursona) sitting at a desk working on a book and drinking a soda. next pannel an alarm going of him jumping up out of the chair tossing the book. third pannel him looking at a screen showing a robbery in progress. forth pannel him running down a flight of stairs behind a book case. fifth pannel him changing and jumping into a car. last pannel him driving out a cave through some bushes
sixth page the robbers in a quick shop holding up the teller. next pannel the lights go out with dark outlines of the people in the shop two robbers and the clerk. third pannel a fist hitting one robber and him falling.forth pannel the second robber slammed into the counter and knocked out. fifth pannel lights come up both robbers tied up.
ok next six pages are oliva/feather(black and white feathered hen) first page you see oliva in the cockpit of a plane in a fighter jet helmet. next pannel her looking over her shoulder from the front plane with a speech bubble saying"drop in 3 boys" you can also see six soldiers(furry or human dont matter) third pannel is seeing that have already jumped out with there chutes not yet open and a third ready to jump, fourth pannel oliva running to the back of the plane screaming missal(sp the rocket thing that goes boom lol) last pannel is the plane getting hit and going down.next page first pannel plane in two peices oliva laying on the ground one very dead soldier over her legs one hanging out of the plane dead and the third one a few feet off dead. next pannel is zoomed in on her face and a vioce is heard off the pannel saying "over here it went down over here" third pannel oliva jumping into the bushes. fourth pannel two soldiers in red walking up to the dead bodies one saying"well they all look dead". fifth pannel is the soldier who said nothing saying "lets make sure" and shooting a body. next page is the three soldiers who jumped from the plane one with a broken leg laying leaned against a log, one with his chute stuck in a tree hanging there, and one who is standing asking if every one is ok. next pannel is the one with the broken leg saying"minus a walking problem im fine" and the one in the tree chuckling. third pannel the one who is ok helping up the one with a busted leg, and the one in the tree reaching for his knife. fourth pannel same as the last but with gun barrels around the edges and a vioce off pannel saying" dont move". fifth pannel is then being led off by red suited gaurds in cuffs.
next page is the three captured soldiers tied up spread eagled in the middle of a room and a dark figure sitting on a chair infront of them(them seen from behind). next pannel is the dark figure saying "where is the rest of your crew?" and the soldier who was fine asking why he wants to know. next pannel is the figure asking the question again, and the same soldier opening his mouth only to get hit by a soldier in red who says "answer him". third pannel is the soldier saying there dead and the hooded figure saying show me. fourth pannel is the soldier who has talked saying "we jumped we dont know where it is". fifth pannel is the soldier with the broken leg getting hit in the leg with a bat and screaming. last pannel is hooded man saying again "where is the plane". next page, is the captives getting lead through the jungle. next page is oliva in a part of the plane checking on equiment(guns radio ect on the tables) with a vioce off pannel saying "there it is". third pannel is oliva jumping up into the top of the plane and hiding there. fourth pannel is the soldiers in red walking into the crashed plane. fifth pannel is soldiers outside looking into the plane with the one with bat inside it. next page is olivia jumping from her spot and knocking out the man with the bat. next pannel is her rolling into cover and grabbing a gun with the soldiers in red shocked. third pannel olivia popping out of cover and shooting two of the soldiers in red. fourth pannel is the last soldier in red screaming "come out now" fifth pannel is the captives beating down the last soldier with there cuffs. last page is a full page picture of oliva freeing her partners and saying "lets do what we came here to do.
full page seen of a court room the two on trail are the two robers from the qick shop as well as seeing a well dressed mouse(the prosocuter) in front of the judge. next page the mouse talking to the judge saying "these two men not only robbed an innocent man, but they tried to kill him. do we really want these men to have any chance of release, any chance to possibly kill someone?" pannel two on the page is an explosion and the doors of the court room being blown open. third pannel is two heavly armed men shooting there way into the court room. third pannel is the mouse laying on the ground scared as the judge is shot above him. fourth pannel is the two on trail and the two gun men walking out the door as the gun men fire into the room killing two guards. next pannel the mouse fleeing through a side door. last pannel the gun men setting up a bomb. next page a full page seen of the mouse in an alley as the courthouse explodes. next page again full page of the mouse in a dirty one bedroom apartment sitting on a bed head hung a beer in his hand.next page is the mouse talking to himself saying "i let them get away" then a pannel of him haggered standing in front of a mirror looking at himself. then a pannelof him looking away from the mirror tears falling from his face. next pannel him saying to himself "never again" then a view into a closet his paw hitting a small button in the corner. last pannel is the closet with an open hidden door revealing a costume folded up all we see is a very dark blue almost black body peice and a dark green cape. last two pages a full veiw of the costume laid on the bed and the mouse with his shirt off saying "dad im sorry but its time to take up the family bussiness"
next page is her and the child slightly grown up living in the gutters. second pannel is her son asking why they live in the gutters and her saying the world thinks he is a freak.third pannel is him asking her if she thinks so too, her answering that he is her son and she loves him even if he is different.next page is modern in all color the child now grown in an abanded building looking out the window at furries passing by and scorning them. next pannel is him somewhere else in the building working on some sort of device muttering about the "furry scum".third pannel is him throwing the wretch and laughing crazy like. fourth pannel him dragging the device up the stairs laughing about killing them all.
next page you see cuddlesmuch(black lab fursona) sitting at a desk working on a book and drinking a soda. next pannel an alarm going of him jumping up out of the chair tossing the book. third pannel him looking at a screen showing a robbery in progress. forth pannel him running down a flight of stairs behind a book case. fifth pannel him changing and jumping into a car. last pannel him driving out a cave through some bushes
sixth page the robbers in a quick shop holding up the teller. next pannel the lights go out with dark outlines of the people in the shop two robbers and the clerk. third pannel a fist hitting one robber and him falling.forth pannel the second robber slammed into the counter and knocked out. fifth pannel lights come up both robbers tied up.
ok next six pages are oliva/feather(black and white feathered hen) first page you see oliva in the cockpit of a plane in a fighter jet helmet. next pannel her looking over her shoulder from the front plane with a speech bubble saying"drop in 3 boys" you can also see six soldiers(furry or human dont matter) third pannel is seeing that have already jumped out with there chutes not yet open and a third ready to jump, fourth pannel oliva running to the back of the plane screaming missal(sp the rocket thing that goes boom lol) last pannel is the plane getting hit and going down.next page first pannel plane in two peices oliva laying on the ground one very dead soldier over her legs one hanging out of the plane dead and the third one a few feet off dead. next pannel is zoomed in on her face and a vioce is heard off the pannel saying "over here it went down over here" third pannel oliva jumping into the bushes. fourth pannel two soldiers in red walking up to the dead bodies one saying"well they all look dead". fifth pannel is the soldier who said nothing saying "lets make sure" and shooting a body. next page is the three soldiers who jumped from the plane one with a broken leg laying leaned against a log, one with his chute stuck in a tree hanging there, and one who is standing asking if every one is ok. next pannel is the one with the broken leg saying"minus a walking problem im fine" and the one in the tree chuckling. third pannel the one who is ok helping up the one with a busted leg, and the one in the tree reaching for his knife. fourth pannel same as the last but with gun barrels around the edges and a vioce off pannel saying" dont move". fifth pannel is then being led off by red suited gaurds in cuffs.
next page is the three captured soldiers tied up spread eagled in the middle of a room and a dark figure sitting on a chair infront of them(them seen from behind). next pannel is the dark figure saying "where is the rest of your crew?" and the soldier who was fine asking why he wants to know. next pannel is the figure asking the question again, and the same soldier opening his mouth only to get hit by a soldier in red who says "answer him". third pannel is the soldier saying there dead and the hooded figure saying show me. fourth pannel is the soldier who has talked saying "we jumped we dont know where it is". fifth pannel is the soldier with the broken leg getting hit in the leg with a bat and screaming. last pannel is hooded man saying again "where is the plane". next page, is the captives getting lead through the jungle. next page is oliva in a part of the plane checking on equiment(guns radio ect on the tables) with a vioce off pannel saying "there it is". third pannel is oliva jumping up into the top of the plane and hiding there. fourth pannel is the soldiers in red walking into the crashed plane. fifth pannel is soldiers outside looking into the plane with the one with bat inside it. next page is olivia jumping from her spot and knocking out the man with the bat. next pannel is her rolling into cover and grabbing a gun with the soldiers in red shocked. third pannel olivia popping out of cover and shooting two of the soldiers in red. fourth pannel is the last soldier in red screaming "come out now" fifth pannel is the captives beating down the last soldier with there cuffs. last page is a full page picture of oliva freeing her partners and saying "lets do what we came here to do.
full page seen of a court room the two on trail are the two robers from the qick shop as well as seeing a well dressed mouse(the prosocuter) in front of the judge. next page the mouse talking to the judge saying "these two men not only robbed an innocent man, but they tried to kill him. do we really want these men to have any chance of release, any chance to possibly kill someone?" pannel two on the page is an explosion and the doors of the court room being blown open. third pannel is two heavly armed men shooting there way into the court room. third pannel is the mouse laying on the ground scared as the judge is shot above him. fourth pannel is the two on trail and the two gun men walking out the door as the gun men fire into the room killing two guards. next pannel the mouse fleeing through a side door. last pannel the gun men setting up a bomb. next page a full page seen of the mouse in an alley as the courthouse explodes. next page again full page of the mouse in a dirty one bedroom apartment sitting on a bed head hung a beer in his hand.next page is the mouse talking to himself saying "i let them get away" then a pannel of him haggered standing in front of a mirror looking at himself. then a pannelof him looking away from the mirror tears falling from his face. next pannel him saying to himself "never again" then a view into a closet his paw hitting a small button in the corner. last pannel is the closet with an open hidden door revealing a costume folded up all we see is a very dark blue almost black body peice and a dark green cape. last two pages a full veiw of the costume laid on the bed and the mouse with his shirt off saying "dad im sorry but its time to take up the family bussiness"
