So I'm giving the non-furry story a break for a bit and I'm returning to the furry porn. On top of that I've given up on proofreaders currently, so I'm going to start posting stuff. First up on the list is a redo of Chapter 1, rewritten into past tense with a few minor other things fixed. I'm not sure if it's better or worse, but opinions on how it reads are always welcome. Enjoy and keep an eye out as there are new stories on the way, VERY soon. Possibly tomorrow. *Crosses fingers and stares at OpenOffice*