Golden Week: Suggestions here:
12 years ago
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Heya people! =D
So, I'm writing and planing the third part of the comic, so, any ideas, suggestions, opinions, share your thoughts, make yourself heard, it helps! =D
And don't be shy, if you don't like exposing your opinion to the public, send me a note with it or e-mail it to goldenweekcomic[at]outlook.com
Thank you all for your attention. =)
So, I'm writing and planing the third part of the comic, so, any ideas, suggestions, opinions, share your thoughts, make yourself heard, it helps! =D
And don't be shy, if you don't like exposing your opinion to the public, send me a note with it or e-mail it to goldenweekcomic[at]outlook.com
Thank you all for your attention. =)
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Second thought: I'm just happy to see it continue, and suggestion boxes like this suggest it's healthily "in motion" :-D
Third: Hoping to see the puppy & lion consummate sooner or later, BUT if it's safer to have more story until then to give it a chance to breathe, that's fine too :)
Fourth: If said consummation was already planned, I imagine IRL there would be serious fallout/consequences, but as long as the fantasy is in your control, I'd rather see a happy ending than a "brutally realistic" one.
And the drama that just unfolded at the end of the last arc was pretty awesome, so expanding on that relationship could be a good stall until the scene we're all waiting for
2- Health is good! I love listening to other's opinions on what I'm doing wrong (or right), so yay. =D
3 and 4 - Yes, there IS going to be consequences for a older guy and a young guy trying to be together, but I can't make any promisses on having sex.
and about the happy ending, it's still all in paper, the story keeps changing so much that it's hard to say if it'll be happy or not, but I'll do my best on making it enjoyable.
And yes, dramas are nice. >XD
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! =D
Can we see some ACTUAL yiffin', please? We've demanding it. X3
And yiff? I reserve the right to answer to that one request. >3
Would be nice to get to know him better.
Adult rated stuff? Not now. Maybe later. And no need to make it super explicit D:
SOme tasteful nudity is always nice =3=
As for yiff, yeah, let it get to a point where yiff is going to be something more than just yiff. =O
And as for tasteful nudity, that's always a greenlight. :P
Romance isn't dead, dammit!
There needs to be a good talk between Derek and Edward. It is easy to assume that the break up (and melt down) was caused by a level of attraction the avian felt for the feline, but there is nothing solid to be able to guarantee that is the reason. It might just be that Edward values the friendship that much and has other issues that have added on top of everything else. Assumptions are easy, but there needs to be a solid discussion between those two room mates, not the emotional fight they had earlier.
Certainly, we've got Scott's storyline and interaction with Derek left on a cliff hanger. While Edward is a friend who is at risk of losing his job as well as "his girl" (as he put it), and that needs to be dealt with as soon as possible, One should not leave the young dog hanging like he had to. I'm not sure what the best way to handle that situation will be, but, shouldn't leave him hanging.
And finally, though it doesn't seem nearly as critical at this juncture, Mike seems like a great guy. He seems p9olite and handling things well under pressure and has a sense of humor about the comments Edward shared about what Derek said.
You've really got plenty of things you can cover. So far, your storytelling has been excellent and I look forward to seeing what comes next for all the characters.
As for suggestions, I can see a lot of people want the sexy stuff to happen, and I can understand that, especially because I have such an affinity for big cats like lions, and booooooy do I. That being said, I don't think sex is the best route here, especially so soon, so don't let people pressure you into it! The reason I love this story so much is because of the build up and the strange little romance that encompasses Derek and Scott. I honestly think sex would ruin that.
As for Edward, I hope this next arch gives him a little more depth, and I'm really looking forward to that~
And to think I just found this comic when logging on to the front page randomly about twenty pages or so ago X3 Please, keep up the awesome work <3
Haha, not really. In all seriousness though. I feel like there shouldn't be any sex in the comic at all. Since it focuses more on the relationships and affection between the different characters within the comic, so avoid the sex. In addition, I feel that there should be an introduction of more female characters, since I feel there should be a female perspective, perhaps include that Toucan or that receptionist lady as a much more developed character.
Greeting for Argentina.
I Like so much your comic and the characters.
And I just have one suggestion, I want to know a little more about the puppy and what´s gonna happen with Mike.
Well, that´s all.
Buena Suerte.
Chau.