hey i did this freestyle a few months back. was wondering what ya think of it and what i could work on.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=buBdJVyYThw

Drill some slow-mo's as right now your fast-to-slow transitions look a little too wobbly (should be more rigid for doing speed changes). Also try working on your chest pops as well, it will make your popping look infinitely better if you can get your chest to pop out when you do your frenzos.

awesome, thanks :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?featur.....;v=tGzalSPv5I8

i did this a while back but i'd like to know what to improve on

IMO your strobing is a little too forced like you have no idea where you want to go (during the buildup to the bass drop), I'd say try adding in a strobing effect to some regular movement rather than trying to totally strobe out (e.g. bring arms from out-to-in and adding in the strobing).

Also try to tone done the variety of moves that you put into the bass drop/chorus, your dance will look a lot nice better with precise controlled moves vs. a bunch of stuff packed into one section.

Hope that helps!

hehehe thanks for the tips!

your head is really stiff. I know your looking around, But remember by moving the body smoothly and knowing the space your working in, are Keys to great performance.

Hi out there. Really a nice idea you had with this journals ^^
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDUGO2PbIb8
I did this a while ago and like to know; any tips about variety and technique?

im like a beginner in jumpstyle but you did good and you have the foundation down, you should put more energy into your arms because it emphasizes your dance like.... put your arms out more swing them along for momentum and you can even use different movements and gestures with your arms and make it your own. for your jumpstyle foot work you have it down but maybe trying tapping your foot to your knee at times or doing a spin and going back into your jumpstyle. you also don't have to make your dance videos that long either because jumpstyle gets exhausting so you could do 1-2 minutes of a song and then another song when you take a break this way you keep up the energy in your vid.

Great, thanks for the detailed feedback, i will take your advices and try to work something out. Especially the thing about breaks in the vid, i never thought about it. I'll definitive try that out too. About the arm-movements; you mean to, for example, to replace the standard-movements with some others or more including them?

well first work on swinging your arms and bringing them more outward sort of to give more emphasis to your jumpstyle, but also you can do more gestures with your arms just to make up some new stuff.