Just as with the first chapter, I am left wanting to know more about whats going on in this world. More than that though, I want to see how the path Jet has decided to take turns out.
You have a very good story here, don't let it fall, don't let the amount of feedback you get discourage you from pursuing whatever ends you have envisioned for it.

oh the books already almost done. Its just been with all the moving and realtor stuff ive been way to stressed to write and finish the last chapter or so left.