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Critique time once more! *if you'd kindly* (art in journal)
11 years ago
that's right everyone!
Once again i'd like some critique on some art I've done while waiting for commissions! If it's not too much to ask c:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u.....urnsreview.jpg
I tried to stick closer to the style of art done for the second game.
So, Any suggestions, ideas, comments, thoughts, please feel free to post them, I'd like to get as much input as possible on what you think works, and what you think may need some improvement
Once again i'd like some critique on some art I've done while waiting for commissions! If it's not too much to ask c:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u.....urnsreview.jpg
I tried to stick closer to the style of art done for the second game.
So, Any suggestions, ideas, comments, thoughts, please feel free to post them, I'd like to get as much input as possible on what you think works, and what you think may need some improvement
well, the use of colors is awesome, but something I notice is that while there are good, sharp lines on the ships the ships they're launching from are comparatively diffuse and softened, which on hard, mechanical items seems to be an anomaly. Overall it looks like a book cover, with the foreground being very well defined and the background much less so, possibly as an attempt to portray distance. overall a very nice image though:)
Thanks for your input ^^
my pleasure:)