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11 years ago
Hey guys, just wanted to let you know that I just found two of my old scripts form a previous comic (befour amongst high) and here it is and some how I never finished it and I forgot about it, if you want to read the other one, ask about it.
“MMMM” (said jack in his bed) what a day I nearly miss school this morning good thing I know a shortcut to get there and on brick I’ll get a squirrel throw in my mouth I almost choc to death I think most of the hair went down my throat welsh that thing in my mouth,(ignore the yellow) at lunch I’ll go hit by a ray that scar my chest then, I’ll fainted in gym class that ray must made me ill so I’d gone home to get some rest and that how my day went today at least I’ve got a day off (so he gone to bed and sleep it off) but like my mum always said to me “there always a new day” (the next moring) "yhaaa" what time is it, wow 11 past look like no one have call me yet wall i've better get meself a drink form the tolier. man it feel like i've got something on my back, oh wall then (so jack get a drink form the tap and then look at mirror to realise they someone but he does not recognised so he turn around and... no one was they. then he look dowe and they something on the ground. it look like a big fluffy scarf so he tries to pit it up and it move, he whe shock he move back and heard a crash sound
It was my friend Jessica who throws that thing at me. She says was reaching a soda can. But instead she grabs a squirrel by mistake. After I said an about her look and I’ll go to get that soda for her from that machine “OUT OF MY MONEY!” (In an angry expression) well she did get me in class in nuke of time so did deserve that and does she like that kind of soda? I don’t know why she about to throw it at me.
That squirrel belongs to my friend Paul he dad is a cop so I’ve makes sure to go on his good side. He is quite good with that squirrel on his shoulder and if you wondering about the name of the squirrel is, it call ladle I know it name after a kitchen tool but it does fit in to it.
At lunch time I go to see jay in the school science lab (another friend of my) He got a new invention which he made and shows off sometime. But in truth I wanted to see he assistant her name is May. I like her she so interesting she from japan and her mum own a sushi restaurant in downtown.
Back to jay and his invention, The invention he calls the “green ray” (It changes plants DNA to make them stronger in harsh varmint so you glow thing in the winter time, also The green ray is power by a liquid which he made it and the green ray is on an old table and looks like it on last leg) so I’ll sends there in a safe distance because he invention sometime explosion (in the room there are me Jess Paul May ladle the squirrel and Jay)
Paul put ladle down when jay at me star up the machine and talk to me and Paul at the same time, Jess talk to May about going to her house for the night. Before anyone notices it, ladle went up to the liquid. Then Ladle small the liquid and sneeze into it, Ladle went back to Paul shoulder, jay ask may to get the liquid and pail into it. So may pail the liquid that require it to work then the ray star to shake?
Now I’ll think about it, the table is not a good place to be on there and I’ll was right, the table broke. Before it smash on the floor it fires and it bounces everywhere up and down left to right and before I’ll know it, it about to hit jess. So I’ll push her out the way and took the shot for her then it hit me, it hit me on the chest and then I’ve lost consonant. When l woke up my friends were worried about me (wall not jay he more was worried about his machine) they thank that I was dead, (that because I’ve been out for about 5 minutes) Then I’ll look at my shirt it was burnt then I’ll took off my shirt and took a look at my chest. My chest was scars and it look like I’ve have a tattoo removal on it and it smells like bacon. It hurt like hell. I try to get up and walk then I’ve start to shaken.( my friend Jess side to me) you need to go home and have a day off, (then I’ve side to her that) I’m OKay, i've just need a drink then I’ve fainted. She is right and my chest dous h
When I’ve got black my home and enter the lounge, my cousin Kate walls in thay as wall she watching TV (she off school today) she ake my why i'm black so early form school and why i've smell bacon, so i've told what happened to me, so she start to laugh at me
, my step mum is also they she reading a book at the mo (she did not notice that I’ve got home so early or a hole in my shirt) so ask Kate how her day was, she said it been ok and that mum didn’t get call today and that good for her so I’ve go to bed. that bring to the day of my life (that the end of my narration). “Yaw” getting late, I’ve better get some sleep for school tomorrow, like my real mum always said to me “they always Newsday”
“MMMM” (said jack in his bed) what a day I nearly miss school this morning good thing I know a shortcut to get there and on brick I’ll get a squirrel throw in my mouth I almost choc to death I think most of the hair went down my throat welsh that thing in my mouth,(ignore the yellow) at lunch I’ll go hit by a ray that scar my chest then, I’ll fainted in gym class that ray must made me ill so I’d gone home to get some rest and that how my day went today at least I’ve got a day off (so he gone to bed and sleep it off) but like my mum always said to me “there always a new day” (the next moring) "yhaaa" what time is it, wow 11 past look like no one have call me yet wall i've better get meself a drink form the tolier. man it feel like i've got something on my back, oh wall then (so jack get a drink form the tap and then look at mirror to realise they someone but he does not recognised so he turn around and... no one was they. then he look dowe and they something on the ground. it look like a big fluffy scarf so he tries to pit it up and it move, he whe shock he move back and heard a crash sound
It was my friend Jessica who throws that thing at me. She says was reaching a soda can. But instead she grabs a squirrel by mistake. After I said an about her look and I’ll go to get that soda for her from that machine “OUT OF MY MONEY!” (In an angry expression) well she did get me in class in nuke of time so did deserve that and does she like that kind of soda? I don’t know why she about to throw it at me.
That squirrel belongs to my friend Paul he dad is a cop so I’ve makes sure to go on his good side. He is quite good with that squirrel on his shoulder and if you wondering about the name of the squirrel is, it call ladle I know it name after a kitchen tool but it does fit in to it.
At lunch time I go to see jay in the school science lab (another friend of my) He got a new invention which he made and shows off sometime. But in truth I wanted to see he assistant her name is May. I like her she so interesting she from japan and her mum own a sushi restaurant in downtown.
Back to jay and his invention, The invention he calls the “green ray” (It changes plants DNA to make them stronger in harsh varmint so you glow thing in the winter time, also The green ray is power by a liquid which he made it and the green ray is on an old table and looks like it on last leg) so I’ll sends there in a safe distance because he invention sometime explosion (in the room there are me Jess Paul May ladle the squirrel and Jay)
Paul put ladle down when jay at me star up the machine and talk to me and Paul at the same time, Jess talk to May about going to her house for the night. Before anyone notices it, ladle went up to the liquid. Then Ladle small the liquid and sneeze into it, Ladle went back to Paul shoulder, jay ask may to get the liquid and pail into it. So may pail the liquid that require it to work then the ray star to shake?
Now I’ll think about it, the table is not a good place to be on there and I’ll was right, the table broke. Before it smash on the floor it fires and it bounces everywhere up and down left to right and before I’ll know it, it about to hit jess. So I’ll push her out the way and took the shot for her then it hit me, it hit me on the chest and then I’ve lost consonant. When l woke up my friends were worried about me (wall not jay he more was worried about his machine) they thank that I was dead, (that because I’ve been out for about 5 minutes) Then I’ll look at my shirt it was burnt then I’ll took off my shirt and took a look at my chest. My chest was scars and it look like I’ve have a tattoo removal on it and it smells like bacon. It hurt like hell. I try to get up and walk then I’ve start to shaken.( my friend Jess side to me) you need to go home and have a day off, (then I’ve side to her that) I’m OKay, i've just need a drink then I’ve fainted. She is right and my chest dous h
When I’ve got black my home and enter the lounge, my cousin Kate walls in thay as wall she watching TV (she off school today) she ake my why i'm black so early form school and why i've smell bacon, so i've told what happened to me, so she start to laugh at me
, my step mum is also they she reading a book at the mo (she did not notice that I’ve got home so early or a hole in my shirt) so ask Kate how her day was, she said it been ok and that mum didn’t get call today and that good for her so I’ve go to bed. that bring to the day of my life (that the end of my narration). “Yaw” getting late, I’ve better get some sleep for school tomorrow, like my real mum always said to me “they always Newsday”
