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Writing feedback wanted
11 years ago
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I'm about to start writing the final part of my story about David & Gordon. It takes place two years later and will have some flashbacks, or it will tell it all chronologically, I'm not sure yet.
But before I start I would love some feedback on part one and two, so that the final part can be the best part.
Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14308197/
Part 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14621290/
But before I start I would love some feedback on part one and two, so that the final part can be the best part.
Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14308197/
Part 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14621290/
