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Progress Report: Part Time at Freddy's
11 years ago
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First off, thank you so much for all the watches and favorites paired towards this small idea of mine, I never thought it would get this much attention, honestly :' If you're a new watcher who hasn't read about the idea(and are interested), please feel free to read it here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/6128323/
But I just thought I'd let everyone know that I'm still, very slowly, working on this project. Motivation to draw the sprites comes and goes while I'm still constantly thinking of scenarios and stories for the guys... I probably should write this stuff down someplace but well, it's all still pretty fresh in there for me. But even if I did, things would probably change as I'm working on them anyway. Things might get a little busy for me eventually but I do want to make this happen.. someday...
Now if you don't mind, I'd like some opinions.. this would really help me put this all together a bit more.
1. What do you think of the title "Part Time at Freddy's"? Should I change it? Keep in mind this is a dating sim spinoff.
2. I'm deciding on not making Fawkes(Foxy) an amputee with a hook replacement. Since these versions are not robots at all and 100% organic, I kinna don't want Foxy to have -that- traumatic of a past.
3. I'm going to turn Chico's bib into a neckerchief and put Let's Eat on the apron instead. Thoughts?
4. The outfits you see them in now will probably only be seen on the first day, as those are their "work uniforms". What kind of clothes do you think Freddy and Chico would wear? I already have ideas for Bonnie and Foxy but feel free to comment on them as well~
And with that, I'm going to write their bios in another journal sometime soon. Should I post them separately or all on one post? Title examples: "Part Time at Freddy's: Bios" vs "Part Time at Freddy's: Foxy Bio" etc. I would put them together in a new submission with a drawing and such but that would pull away from my sprite drawing time.. Or maybe I'll hold off and post a bio submission when I've completed the base sprites for each character. For example when I finish Foxy's base sprites, I'll submit a pic with his bio information, and then onward. This will however, take longer to release their bio information.. But we shall see!
Thanks again for all the watches and favorites <3
But I just thought I'd let everyone know that I'm still, very slowly, working on this project. Motivation to draw the sprites comes and goes while I'm still constantly thinking of scenarios and stories for the guys... I probably should write this stuff down someplace but well, it's all still pretty fresh in there for me. But even if I did, things would probably change as I'm working on them anyway. Things might get a little busy for me eventually but I do want to make this happen.. someday...
Now if you don't mind, I'd like some opinions.. this would really help me put this all together a bit more.
1. What do you think of the title "Part Time at Freddy's"? Should I change it? Keep in mind this is a dating sim spinoff.
2. I'm deciding on not making Fawkes(Foxy) an amputee with a hook replacement. Since these versions are not robots at all and 100% organic, I kinna don't want Foxy to have -that- traumatic of a past.
3. I'm going to turn Chico's bib into a neckerchief and put Let's Eat on the apron instead. Thoughts?
4. The outfits you see them in now will probably only be seen on the first day, as those are their "work uniforms". What kind of clothes do you think Freddy and Chico would wear? I already have ideas for Bonnie and Foxy but feel free to comment on them as well~
And with that, I'm going to write their bios in another journal sometime soon. Should I post them separately or all on one post? Title examples: "Part Time at Freddy's: Bios" vs "Part Time at Freddy's: Foxy Bio" etc. I would put them together in a new submission with a drawing and such but that would pull away from my sprite drawing time.. Or maybe I'll hold off and post a bio submission when I've completed the base sprites for each character. For example when I finish Foxy's base sprites, I'll submit a pic with his bio information, and then onward. This will however, take longer to release their bio information.. But we shall see!
Thanks again for all the watches and favorites <3
You can also post the bios when you're done with the stuff.
If I could I would choose a tall shark with a black sclera and golden iris who works with fawks with a cocky personality and a short lynx with a shy personality,
with charlie a Tsundere orange siberian tiger chef and a polite white lion waiter both muscular and tall,
with bermard a tall muscular bull as the bartender with a rough personality and a energetic husky as a waiter as well
For freddy A wolf (think of ten kodori , his physical built and personality ) as a bouncer and a doberman just slightly less aggressive more annoyed also a bounce after all this is a gay club and there are people who would want to hurt them.
I think you should be able to go other places to know them, And I pray it will be longer than five night's because it doesn't have to be exactly like the scary game but something new
1. I like the title as it is
2.let the hook be fake please because it would be too distracting
3.make let's eat smaller and on the apron, I must see his chest
4.I hope you make front and back sprites with plenty of expressions, want to get a good view who your banging.
I do plan on having places to go to get to know them better and will be much longer than just five nights. The main focus is getting to know them, not much scary in it except for the one night mentioned in the Idea.
I won't be doing back sprites, but I am considering putting in sexual pictures, much like Morenatsu did, keyword there though is "considering". Still haven't decided completely. yet. Expressions I enjoy doing so I'm going to try adding a lot of them.
2 - It`s better he have a real hand, but, since he have a teather of pirate, you could give him a hook grip, witch is a bracelet with a horizontal grip inside it to make he grab it and use the hook.
3 - It`s good for me
4 - Freddy could wear a suit with no trousers, make all people see his pants ( > u < ) Chico could have a girly apparence costume, like bra with the neckerchief and apron only on the underwear.
I have already put some requests in your Idea Page, but, if you didn`t see it, I`ll put it in here. Sorry if it disturb here...
I really liked your Idea. I`m not a good artist, but, if you can give me your permition to make the outfits of them, I probabbly would make it.
Also, I really liked them, that I want to draw them in my story too, so, if you can give me this permition, maybe I would make a manga of Me and The 5 guys. Ofcourse, I wont make a manga based on your plans, but, since I liked your characters, I really want to make a story with them and if you allows
me to do it, I would probabbly be very happy.
Here`s some questions if you allows me to make their outfit:
1-Allow them to have a sexually outfit?
2-Allow them to have a girly outfit?
Here`s some questions if you allow me to make a manga of Me and The 5 guys:
1-If it have to be a horror story, do you have any suspect and the real murderer to request me to draw?
2-If it have to be a love story, can I make a story that Mike choose anyone besides Foxy, and since I`m a fox, I choose Foxy?
3-If you dont have any suspect and the real murderer to request me, can I make it looks just a story to tell to children to make them be away from this nightclub?
4-If the nightclub have to close up, can I make a another club for them?
Thanks for you attention, and I really loved your plans, so, I`m really waiting your story becomes a real art to show to us!
Sorry if my English is weird and wrong on any momments, but since I`m a half of Japanese and Brazilian, I dont speak English very well...
Again, thanks for your attention.
Sincerelly, Agent Kyuukon
As for clothing I think Freddy would be fun in a more country/redneck outfit, which is so opposite his "formal" costume for work. He wants outta that thing as soon as he gets off.
Chico I think would keep the handkerchief, and have bright colors, maybe some fishnet if he's feeling edgy, maybe something with sequins or metallic print? Keep it realistic (street clothes wise) but expressive.
Also I would love to contribute in the writing category if you need help with that. It could be anything from receiving what you come up with and sending feedback on wording and such all the way to submitting pieces of writing to you based on your vision of conversation/storyline. Or anything in between.
Let me know :)
I'm feeling... Suitpants and jacket over button up for bonnie. Don't know why, just feels like something the version you've shown us would wear...
Next is Freddy, and for him I'm getting a muscleshirt or tanktop vibe with stonewashed jeans...
Chico, personally, i'd like to see cross dress, but doesn't fully fit him so... I'd go with hoodies and corduroy pants, probably with one earbud of a music device in...
Fawkse gives me the idea of loose fitting clothing, a t-shirt that's one size to large for him and pant, probably slacks, that only stay on because he has a belt.
Those are my suggestions based on the 'screenshots' you've given us. Have fun.
I love reading and would be glad to help with proofreading or just generally writing tips and help. Have fun, hun.