This was actually a rather entertaining read. I will admit that a little bit of backstory would have been nice, but the overall style with which it was written in was quite well done. I would probably recommend is space out the timeline a bit, the aging process was rather quick and quite sudden. Perhaps space the aging out with more Sky+Greg but Sky still remembering Seth type of thing, and then lead into the death in Seth's arms thing. The descriptive wording, though, was a very nice touch.

All in all I would say that this was very nicely done, but definitely needs some backstory written in.

Thanks, Has! It's kind of hard to write the back story properly because there is so much! It's based off of an rp with a friend I did, it's shirt of supposed to be a quick retelling of what happened and supposed to be more focused on the present? Or something like that!

Thank you for reading it ;_;