A legend about two rulers and a guardian
10 years ago
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Shortly i am writing a story, this is just a start for it. I decided to show this, because i want to know is there any grammar mistakes in start of it :D
"Legend says:
A long time ago, there was two wolves: Black wolf and white wolf. Both of them were males.
These two wolves controlled our world. Black wolf was a ruler of sickness, wars and deaths. White wolf was a ruler of love, peace and healthiness.These two wolves had a long time peace, but then something happened.
Two wolves started a war. They were having a fight with each other. Their fight felt like it was taking forever. When 3 days were gone, they were both still fighting with each other. Other creatures couldn't do anything, these two were too might and this fight could take to the end of the world.
There is a wolf who could stop this fight. Wolf is grey wolf who is guardian of wideness and universe. This grey wolf, was a female. She disliked fights and heard about two ruler wolves fight. Guardian of wideness and universe tried to stop fight, but both wolves attacked on her. When wolves thought, that grey wolf was powerless, grey wolf was actually lot more powerful than those two."
Also, this is inspired by a legend which my friend told me awhile ago :3
"Legend says:
A long time ago, there was two wolves: Black wolf and white wolf. Both of them were males.
These two wolves controlled our world. Black wolf was a ruler of sickness, wars and deaths. White wolf was a ruler of love, peace and healthiness.These two wolves had a long time peace, but then something happened.
Two wolves started a war. They were having a fight with each other. Their fight felt like it was taking forever. When 3 days were gone, they were both still fighting with each other. Other creatures couldn't do anything, these two were too might and this fight could take to the end of the world.
There is a wolf who could stop this fight. Wolf is grey wolf who is guardian of wideness and universe. This grey wolf, was a female. She disliked fights and heard about two ruler wolves fight. Guardian of wideness and universe tried to stop fight, but both wolves attacked on her. When wolves thought, that grey wolf was powerless, grey wolf was actually lot more powerful than those two."
Also, this is inspired by a legend which my friend told me awhile ago :3
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