After much outlining and theoretical planning, I have begun working on my interactive story project. Currently, the introduction has been drafted, and I am in need of proofreaders. I need one or two people to go through the short introduction (3 pages, 945 words) and give me some feedback.

For the sake of clarity, I'm not looking for someone to gloss over it and say "It's good."

I need proofreaders who will give some serious critiques, that way I can improve it for the eventual release.