Yes. More please.

This seems pretty neat! I'm certainly interested in whatever else you can cook up.

Just one scenario, sooo many combinations! I must say, I'm highly impressed!
But I did notice some flaws. If you go; boy-eevee female-attack-take of clothes-tell her to pleasure you-get eevee to lick her; You will get a sentence like this: "She's really good with his tongue. Trust me, I should know."
And if you go; boy-nidoran male-attack-tell her to pleasure nidoran-do spinda; there is one part saying "spind" instead of "spinda".
I haven't gone through much with Axel yet. (Or was it Alex?) But so far I couldn't find anything wrong with starting your story as a girl.

I'm really looking forward to see more of this, and I hope for goodness sake that other will take time and read it as well! It's great now, how will it be when it's bigger?

Thanks for this, I'll look it over and see if I can iron that out. Both eevee routes were sort of written in a binge session, after which I ended up with a migraine and immediately passed out. I'm particularly dreading going back over the girl/eevee stuff and making sure it's not a mess, because I was really starting to feel out of it by the end of work on that part.

Was intriguing enough that I ran through almost every option. Definitely has promise.

Just did the 'boy' half, let me do points then go back and do the girl half...
-I like the ability to finish up at almost any time. Allows reader to skip an encounter if not headed where they might care for.
-Starter options could be more robust and clear on how they will lead things. I mean that the Nidoran being more rough was a bit unexpected. That said, did like the differences between the Growlithe and Nidoran paths.
-I think getting her number was a bit too universal (unless a bigger plan in place on where that goes). I think if she enjoyed it in some manner, get the number. Otherwise, no.
-I think this is built as page to page to page and nothing more. Curious if can do certain flags or small coding things to make tracking some decisions easy. Do not know how, though.
-Getting to the Spinda was a bit rarer than would expect, but I think that worked out fine. Like a tougher scene to achieve, needed the trainer distraction. The Spinda being into it was fine, but should be about an even split on the whole of Pokemon encounters that are into it Vs naive.

Now... 'girl' half.
-Oh god.... Welp, know a Alex and do not want this XD
-Huh. Was expecting different choices for Pokemon. Not super different, but more like mirror equivalents.
-Would push the two dicks scene to knew able to take both at the same time, but nice to get a preview. Though... a bit odd when considering already so many ways to get anal as well.
-Getting the guy to fuck your Eevee went pretty well. The girl getting into the male Pokemon on the 'boy' side was about what was expected. The boy on this side was written well to show him falling into the greatness of the dark side.
-LOTS of femdom-ish options on this side. I like that you can get such a variety from going a bit slower on options (off with clothes first > jerk off > x). The best scenes you could reach were letting your Pokemon do yourself while he watched. And then still had options left. Worked out very well.

Am interested in where this goes and what more we will see. Hopefully some bigger Pokemon too, but I think that's basically a given.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll address some of your points.

Adding more starting pokemon would be a very, very long term goal. The more pokemon available to the reader, the greater the complexity of every encounter that involves them. It took me about two days to finish up each full branch, and that's only a single encounter. So an initial limit had to be set somewhere; three choices is sort of traditional for pokemon, and it allowed for what I felt was a decent amount of variety as far as their personalities. I've been strongly considering rewording some of the starting entries and asking the reader to confirm their chosen pokemon before committing, specifically because of Nidoran.

As it is right now, the reader gains their rival's contact information in most circumstances; it's possible not to get it but you'd have to choose some pretty boring options. The relationship between the reader and the rival is planned to be a pretty large series of events that they can choose whether or not to pursue. I suppose that it could be made more difficult to get their contact info, but it would cut readers out of a lot of stuff right off the bat.

I'm using Twine for this - in fact, enterprising individuals can import the html directly into Twine and look at the extremely disorganized project in the raw if they so choose; so in a way, this is entire project will be open-source. It's a tool that is very user-friendly for beginners but also allows scripting and coding for more advanced users. I fall squarely in the beginner category; I don't know any html or css. In fact, the last coding class I took was in Visual Basic, 20 years ago (is Visual Basic even still a thing?) The project already keeps track of a lot of variables that will change interactions later on down the line - for instance, it keeps track of how the encounter with your rival ended, and how many times your rival has been exposed to pokephilia in one form or another, etc. But anything more advanced than that is simply beyond my personal abilities.

The femdom angle for playing as a girl was definitely intentional. I think that it's important that the reader has a strong sense of agency when making their choices, and this naturally leads to a certain amount of femdom when playing as a girl. That's not to say that there won't be options for either gender to put themselves in positions to be dominated in future events, however, especially if one chooses Nidoran as the girl.

Not being able to take both dicks has been a big complaint so far, haha. I sort of expected it. I know, it seems arbitrary when you have so many other choices. I didn't include it initially because the reader will be able to visit their rival any time upon arriving in Lumiose, and I wanted to save at least a few interesting options for later. It would also be very easy to go back and add it in at any point though.

It's a shame this didn't get more feedback, I thoroughly enjoyed it and would love to see more.

An honewst critic, this is not opening properly. Hence, I can't read it. Do I have to extract it first?

I have been following this for almist a decade, but somehow I am late to the party, but am really interested in this continueing. theres not much to say that hasnt already been said...

For those lurkers like me, post a comment. Maybe punjoke will still continue this if enough people have shown an interest, despite it having been so long