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Chroma Slip Backstory Rewritten
10 years ago
o after some much need advice from an already established member of the review community i am endevouring to do a near complete rewrite of Chroma Slips Headcannon
So here are the issues i was made aware of with my orginal backstory
1:Avoid Cannon Characters as much as possible
2:Avoid Cliche and Dangeorus locations such as the everfree forest
3:try to tone down the character a little to be just a tiny bit more believable
So without furhter ado lets do my rewrite
Chroma Slip was a member of Princess lunas night guard (and therfore a batpony) who after leaving the night guard for (still unspecified) reasons traveled until settling down on the outskirts of ponyville. Facing isolation and not receiving an incredibly good reception due to Being a batpony he soon settled into a hermatic lifestyle pouring himself into research of many things taking an special shining to Alchemy and Transmutation. He poured himself into his new passion and made such bounds and strides in his new chossen field that he even aquired his cutie mark ((a potion turning lead into a multi colored crystaline version of itself)) wellllllll one day he got abit shall we say overconfident despite having never attempted transmutation with a living being before and against all warnings in his books not to attempt it he attempted to use an alchemical potion on himself that was supposed to transmute him from his batpony self to a Pegasus pony in hopes he would receive a better reception in town..... well. ... It .... flopped. ... bad. ...he didnt succed in transmuting himself but he did succeed in changin changing his coloration from the dark night guard grayish blue to white with a few additional Markings. Seeining the state he had put himself in he delved even deeper into his studies intending to master his chosen profession no matter how long it took.
So here are the issues i was made aware of with my orginal backstory
1:Avoid Cannon Characters as much as possible
2:Avoid Cliche and Dangeorus locations such as the everfree forest
3:try to tone down the character a little to be just a tiny bit more believable
So without furhter ado lets do my rewrite
Chroma Slip was a member of Princess lunas night guard (and therfore a batpony) who after leaving the night guard for (still unspecified) reasons traveled until settling down on the outskirts of ponyville. Facing isolation and not receiving an incredibly good reception due to Being a batpony he soon settled into a hermatic lifestyle pouring himself into research of many things taking an special shining to Alchemy and Transmutation. He poured himself into his new passion and made such bounds and strides in his new chossen field that he even aquired his cutie mark ((a potion turning lead into a multi colored crystaline version of itself)) wellllllll one day he got abit shall we say overconfident despite having never attempted transmutation with a living being before and against all warnings in his books not to attempt it he attempted to use an alchemical potion on himself that was supposed to transmute him from his batpony self to a Pegasus pony in hopes he would receive a better reception in town..... well. ... It .... flopped. ... bad. ...he didnt succed in transmuting himself but he did succeed in changin changing his coloration from the dark night guard grayish blue to white with a few additional Markings. Seeining the state he had put himself in he delved even deeper into his studies intending to master his chosen profession no matter how long it took.
