A complete overhaul/rewrite of my Star Wars Sith story
10 years ago
Everyone needs a theme song to their life, I have found mine.
https://youtu.be/NZf15xVrOW8
Here's one that will take you back in time. Let yourself get washed over with nostalgia by this song. ❤️❤️❤️
https://youtu.be/KbetxHAfU4M
And this one, this one has a special place in my heart, I can only think about the girl I am secretly, and seriously crushing on.
https://youtu.be/Mypzmkpv1o4
https://youtu.be/NZf15xVrOW8
Here's one that will take you back in time. Let yourself get washed over with nostalgia by this song. ❤️❤️❤️
https://youtu.be/KbetxHAfU4M
And this one, this one has a special place in my heart, I can only think about the girl I am secretly, and seriously crushing on.
https://youtu.be/Mypzmkpv1o4
Oh the constant struggles of being a writer, and especially one who suffers procrastination.. >-<
Anyway. I have been working on my Star Wars based Sith story for several years now, I had a few chapters written up, and a majority of my story plotted out ready to be worked on and added into my story, but now as my mind would have it I have decided to make some major changes which I hope will work better than what I previously had.
Originally my character started off as a Jedi and then stepped over to the Dark Side, this still remains unchanged, what has changed is instead of my character being taken to Coruscant as an infant I now have my character already there as a young man. Originally my character's was named Vin Kaay, this has now changed to Rosh Durren, he still hails from Alderaan (please keep in mind this story takes place 60 years before the rise of the Empire).
I finally found a name for Rosh's Twi'lek girlfriend, naming her Adinsefi Tarkona, still having trouble trying to decide where the two first meet in the story.
Rosh's first step to the Dark Side still remains the same.
Later on in the story when Rosh meets his Sith Master, Darth Apocalypse he is taught and trained in the use of the Dark Side to become a full fledged Sith taking the name of Darth Harkoon. Now keep in mind at this point in the storyline the Empire has been defeated by the Rebellion and has been slowly rebuilding after the Emperor and Vader have been killed.
Apocalypse and Harkoon abolish the "Rule of Two" and form the House of Apocalypse and soon after start recruiting to rebuild the Sith of old. Harkoon takes on three apprentices; Darth Sabis a Bothan, Aramis Fess a Pau'an, and his own girlfriend Adinsefi.
And finally after months of trying to find a personal quote for my Sith I finally came up with this;
"The Dark Side is my ally, my anger gives me clarity, my hatred gives me strength. To those who stand before my might, tremble in fear. Woe to the ones who challenge my awesomeness."
So what do you all think? I always love hearing feedback on my ideas, it always helps me work harder on my projects. I would love to hear what you think, feel free to comment.
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