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Sorry about the story delay
10 years ago
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Sorry about the delay to Cocoa and Sparks story for the small group of people who were reading it, I plan on continuing it soon but every time i finished the next chapter i was not happy with it and i threw it out a lot.
Yina Ferru
~yina
A story is always needed to be revised until you're satisfied with it. ^^
mikenike684
~mikenike684
How about having someone proofread it before you post it and give feedback
Cheesecaker
~cheesecaker
OP
its not really about spelling, its more writers block and how i felt a lack of passion in what i re read to myself. I kind of want the story to be a thing of passion for me and not just writing it for the sake of it.
mikenike684
~mikenike684
No no, I don't really mean for mistakes... I mean more for help on like... Word choice, how you word the story moreso than just checking for spelling and grammar mistakes
Cheesecaker
~cheesecaker
OP
oh i seei appreciate the offer but its more i want the story to be my own words and my own passion and if i feel the passion is lacking id rather wait until i feel its right if you know what i mean.
mikenike684
~mikenike684
Alright, but ya know ya can't do everything on your own, sometimes you need help and there'll be people there to help ya out :)
Cheesecaker
~cheesecaker
OP
thanks man :)
Sirjoshd109
~sirjoshd109
Ernest Hemmingway once said write drunk edit sober. Me personally I just write when i'm really tired since when your really tired the logic part of your brain shuts down and the creative side takes over.
