If you want to draw Akrir you are more than welcome to.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17989496/

O_O So cool looking ty I'll give it a try.

haha thanks, the artist is one of my faves. they have the best comicbook style that I wish I had. (I am doing painting style for practice and waiting on commissions myself so yeah)

don't sell yourself short you have a very beautiful fade style (don't know if that the right term) one of the reason I watch you it so pleasant to look at.^^

Thanks ^^'

Forgot to ask would like it more funny or serious.

He is more serious but draw him as you see him.

I'm a writer, so if you want I don't mind critiquing your work for you ^_^

Much appreciated.^^

Left you some comments on the story link.

Also with regards to your sketches, if you'd like, you could draw a picture of my mate, Lee: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17963539/

O goodness so rocking ,but the feather. I see you in January XD jk ty for the permission.

I'm gonna have to go read it when I get home, I love reading and I occasionally write but since I do a lot of in depth roleplay I might be able to give some usefull citique.

Would be happy to get any. I really want this one to be a good one. So I can kick off my other two stories as well. Ty for the help.^^

it's really interesting but there's a lot I think could use changing (including grammar mistakes like missing letters and such) mind if I just copy paste the text in a note and change what I think would be more pleasant to read? I'll then send you the note and you can compare it with the original (or I could underline every bit I change so it's easier for you)

also, if you want to draw, I'd be curious if you're any good at drawing pistols. My.. "special operative" character could use a good gun.

Sure thank you. And I can try what type do prefer revolver, bolt action or Somthing custom.

something custom, in this style but with a shorter barrel http://www.deviantart.com/art/Custo.....stol-197361029
and then a red dot sight and a silencer and a flashlight on the bottom of the barrel. there's good reference pictures on google for all of these in all sorts of angles.
and if I now ask too much just tell me so.

Last question what time line do they deal with. Just depending I might be able add a feature along with the look.

what do you mean with line?

if you mean work, she's a government assassin

K thanks I get it to you as soon as possible.

no need to hurry, there's plenty of time.
also, sent you a note with my altered version of your story, I hope it helps.