I thought the format was pretty innovative. Left me things to discover in successive read-throughs. I enjoy your story telling on your comics and in general. The content, story, pacing was all good, though it does feel a little disconnected from the first two. Not a serious disconnect, but I was a little unclear on her motivation to dose the two in the shower. I would have liked a frame on how she transmitted it to the bunny girl also.
There's not anything I would take out of it. As far as additions, I would have liked to see some of the male from the shower losing his maleness. You certainly put a hell of a lot of work into it, so I consider extra detail to be bonus territory.

I'm glad someone liked the caps, I was excited about those. The motivation on the shower was unclear? They were mocking her (she's got a big chip on her shoulder), and the dude was cheating on a friend of hers. The bunny girl, basically just touching her transmitted it, since she's become a carrier of the thing.

Ick, not really a fan of seeing the dick become a vag. I do see it a lot in other people's works though. This is actually something people find hot? I dunno, I guess I could throw in a panel or two...

I am a huge fan of the first one, and i still loved the second, but i think the first with the various TFing from inanimateTF to age progression was what really made me love it~

Though one thing i was super grateful for in the second was the folder with each panel as it's own separate picture, that's my favorite way to view porn so i was really happy to see it was added as an additional viewing option~

I would really love to see some more inanimate TF in the next one if you could fit it ^^ the objects passing the condition is really cool :D

Age progression! I didn't actually include any of this intentionally. Did you get this impression from all the boob growth? Also yes I've got big plans for more inanimate, but next issue is tiny and I had it outlined for just TFTG to anthro and feral. Hmm, can I squeeze in inanimate somehow...

ahhh, the age progression was with the sister that had been turned into a puppy in the original uncoloured comic then returning to her original size in the vent and lactating into the lady's drink~

Oh you thought there was age regression when she got smaller? I was just sorta playing with macro/micro themes. The cannon explanation would be that she's changing dog breeds. Also, in what age regression does a person keep all their curves? =P

mostly magic ones, hahaha :P

either way the addition of more TFs combined with the feral/anthro TFs would be really cool to see more of ^^

Tbh I'm not really a fan of macro/micro or age progression... But the sallem comic showed that micro can be kinda hot, so maybe...

really anything from hypnotism, accidental bondage/ collar and leash (maybe stuck out in the yard on a pole~), piercings, any kink that sorta flows with what you're already going with i am a really big fan of ^^ anyway i won't keep pestering ya with ideas, haha, i'll be buying the next pack regardless ;D

Nah nah, ideas are fine. Actually the first two are already planned to fit into the series somewhere. Never thought of piercings, like earrings and stuff, as a kink though heh.

i was including body/nipple piercings in there as well but even just some earrings would be cool~ it can really emphasize the ear's changing with the earring shifting into a new spot :3

could even have the piercing turn into one of those tags they clip into dog's ears sometimes~

i would also say tattoos, but honestly they can end up more trouble than they're worth haha

uhh, the only other thing i could think of is more lactation/breast sucking~

I can't wait to see what you've got in store for us ^^

>CTRL + C

>Opens planning doc

>CTRL + V

hahaha ;D

I just realized something: You were grateful for the small pictures, but did you realize that you can click or use arrow keys throughout the comic to view zoomed in versions of the panels?

i wasn't aware of that actually until i read someone's comment here yesterday, i tend to flip through a lot of different folders while reading tho, so the pictures outside of the html pages were really handy

That said, just read through again on the html and the text was realllly good <3 definitely add a ton to the comic~!

Excellent =)

i think persoanlly all your missing is a little more depth on the senario's of the comics because one and three had little explination as to how the events came about i think what was needed was a little bit more explination in an introduction is all

Well, #1 was meant to be mysterious. #3 is just the girl from the dog clinic in #2 heading off to a party. There's not really much backstory beyond "She fills a bottle with infected saliva, changes clothes, and goes to party." I take it I should have explained this better

hmm, need to be constructive. it was pretty awesome. the length of the tfs might have been too long. an odd thing to complain about.

I think I follow, after the first one showing every aspect of the TF is a bit redundant, unless they're different or hotter in some way. Also it eats a crazy number of panels, so... I'm thinking I'll be a bit more sparing with (redundant) TF details.

As much as I'd love to give you a review I've never gotten to read them X3 I dun have the money X'3

Well, I've made more than enough cash off Becumming #2, maybe I should discount it significantly with the next release... Probably shouldn't just make it free however, because that might piss off people who bought it.

X3 yeah! I could see how that would X3 I'd need to get one of those paypal things right? X3 I'm kinda sad I don't talk to you more because I used to watch your art all the time and comment here and there X3 Back when you were doing the fox mask stuff and I really would have loved to tell you how great your art looked and how much you were improving X3 or how scared I was when you were going to leave the fandom! Your art is awesome and I'm sure from the little examples I've seen, your becumming series is great X3

Fox mask? There was a fox mask in Becumming #3, but I don't recall one outside of that... And thanks.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2289060/ lol this one X3 and thank you X3 I'm just sorry that we never really got to be friends X3 I shouldn't have been so shy and tried to comment more X3

Ah, I forgot about that one heh. Also I don't understand being shy with an anonymous online account. As long as you're not a dick, you're set heh.

X3 I remember a lot of your old works X3 I think I first saw you on DeviantArt! lol and I'm still kinda shy today about certain things but when I was a lot younger my friends sent me all these like videos and stuff about cyber stalkers and people who ended up killing themselves because of people getting their personal information and ruining their lives. It really scared me for the longest time! Do you have time to wanna go into notes and hang out a little bit? :3 I'd love to finally get to know you as the person behind the sexy wonderful art :3

well i liked the captions ^^

Woot, I was excited about those but didn't know if people would respond.

I didnt see them the first go though X3 then i clicked on a picture and went o awesome get to read it all over again!

Hm, really should have added instructions at the start. Do you know you can use arrow keys?

mmm? wait do you mean the keyboard ones? or the ones in the file

I mean when you have the comic open, press the keyboard arrow keys and you'll go from panel to panel.

O my i did not realize ><

Well I was a little disappointed that the only M-to-F changed ended up futa rather than entirely female... but that's just my personal preference. >.>

As for the format, I thought it worked pretty well once I understood how it worked.

Yeah I'm not normally a fan of futa, but someone made a great point while planning it that there was no penis in vagina sex! That obviously needed fixing, so I slapped a penis in there XD

I did try to pass it off as a normal TG for a while though, for people who dislike futa. Also, how hard was it to figure out the format?

Well just spitballing ideas here, but the P-in-V sex could have happened before the change completed as a "last gasp of masculinity" sort of thing, or if futa was going to happen, the girl could have become futa and dommed the former guy for some role-reversal. I'm not sure how well either of those ideas would have flown with other readers but there's almost always multiple ways to put a dick in something if one needs to be there.

And the format wasn't that tricky, I just clicked on one of the pics by happenstance working out how to turn the larger pages.

Hm apparently I need to include instructions in the product, because at least two people missed on the release poster that you can use arrow keys.

It didn't really occur to me to have him get laid as a dude actually, he was purely in there for TG. But there will be some dude on girl sex in the future. Also, I didn't think to add a dick until I'd storyboarded pretty much the whole thing.

I missed the inanimate transformation into a life size rubber relief toy :/ kinda like what you had in the earlier comic ^^.

Yeah I've got big inanimate plans, but since this comic is so short they might have to wait till next one... I'll see what I can do.

Where can I find #1?

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/14634433/ It's free online, but under a different name.

This is off topic but you work in general is something I regularly wank it to your definitely my go to artist for anything TF I especially enjoyed that two page one were the guy gets turned into a pink rubber toy and anything were after TF a feral dog mounts the whoever got changed
I really just wanted to say thank you and your hopes that someone gets off to your art are........ fulfilled? I don't know what to use there but I've had like 150 orgasams looking at your work so thanks one hundred and fifty

Huh I don't think I've got that many with any one artist... Maybe a story writer though. Also, a bit TMI but I guess I was asking for it.

The zoom view was kind of weird. Some parts you couldn't click, and some parts that didn't look like you could click had something. You needed navigation arrows to move between the zoomed frames. The "next page" link moved a whole page over instead of to the next frame.

Use the arrow keys to go from frame to frame, as I said in the release poster. Guess I should include that in the product next time. The only parts that you couldn't click were places where the rectangular click zones were fitting together poorly, and left a gap. But every panel except for the xray cum shot has a zoomed in version, and a handful even have alts if you use arrow keys.

honestly i really freaking loved it. i binged the 30ish bucks on it and was very very satisfied with the purchase. i felt i really got my monies worth. i would actually gladly pay the same price once again for something equally long. hell, a lil longer, and a lil pricier would even spangle my banners.

but i really wanna see a sequel to becumming. it was well made, as is all of your art.

I felt truely spoiled. :P

Well, isn't that a glowing review haha. Glad you liked it so much

lol. as i always say, ive been a fan of your art since the transfur.com days. i appreciate the detail you put into every pic, and i appreciate the unique style that only your art has. plus youre fucking good at transformation art, which is something that allot of artists struggle with, including myself. XD

also you seem to be the only tf artist that frequently does stuff like multibreast art. and i appreciate that.
i thoroughly enjoyed spending that money because i knew itd help support an artist i respect and admire as a fan and friend, and it was screaming deal :3

one of these days i wanna afford a commission or a trade or something. thatd be the absolute pinnacle of my career here on FA. :3

Whelp, glad you liked it all so much. My commissions are still pretty costly but I might be able to get that down with time.

fufufu well ill be keeping an eye out, as always for that perfect price and deal :3
afterall yer on my bucket list of artists i dream of working with or commissioning from :P

The art was amazing but as far as the getting off factor, something about the first becumming has made that my favorite and the two after weren't as good for me but I can't put my finger exactly on why. I think because it focused so much on the breast expansion and they got pretty big but that is just a personal thing for me that I like more with tf and tg art.

Something you do good with is conveying the mental change of the people through the dialogue though which I think often plays a bigger part than people might give it credit for.

I still really enjoyed parts 2 and 3 though and in ranking order of my favorite I would say #1, #3, then #2.

I've opined what I like about your work before. I like the gradual changes, I'm a fan of male to female, I like the transitional stages and especially panels where they linger a bit between one form and the next, and I like the displays of arousal. It was all on display in the last Becumming and your art has improved as well. It was a treat.

Well I am really late with this but better late then never.

I will mostly focus on the transformations in this comic. If there is any confusion on what I mean check out my Transformation vocabulary sheet in my gallery.

-First the two first transformations.

It is almost a stationary Tf only with sex in between but I like the length of it.

The trigger was some kind of substance witch did not make much sense to me because shouldn't the shower wash it away.

I like that the operator gets a backfire and starts transforming and I like that she could make the transformation go away.

The subjects were kinda aware of the transformation but did not panic. They were to a small degree confused but not so noticeable.
I did not feel the tf feeling so much. They where busy having sex.

I like that the transformation makes the boobs press against each other. It's making the tf in charge of the story in a way. Like: boobs grow, what is that pressing on my boobs, it was your boobs, etc. It would be cool if something like that had the charge of the hole transformation.

It was good that the transformation did not happen to them both at the same time. That made it feel like the transformation was spreading like a virus.

There was consequential tf. The tf made them horny, made them unable to get out of the shower, unable to speak and stand. I would like tf with big consequences because it makes the tf more severe.

-Now for the two last transformations.

First thing I like here is the bunny ears. It was a good thing to start with. It was a consequential action that made someone else transform.

I like how the operator is transforming alongside the subject making her a subject too.

I also like the mental animal traits at the end if the transformation. Making them think like they were a bunny and a fox.

The length was smaller then the first one but I thought it was okay. It was less then a stationary tf then the first tfs.

I think these two tfs (four) had a lot of goodies it them but it would be cool to see one there it was one thing that the transformation was based on. Like having the animal traits start in the beginning and get more and more, or making her(the operator) try to not transform while transforming others.

I don't know what more to give. I liked this comic, mostly because it was massive. The art was excellent and the panels were good. I crave for more. If I must give a score I will probably give a 7/10.

I take it you didn't read Becumming #2 or click on the panels to read the captions? You're pretty confused on what's causing the TFs...

> It's making the tf in charge of the story in a way.
> It would be cool if something like that had the charge of the hole transformation.

Not sure of your use of the word 'charge' here, amusingly it's not on your vocab sheet. How can the boob growth (TF) be "in charge of the whole transformation"? Makes no sense.

>but it would be cool to see one there it was one thing that the transformation was based on. Like having the animal traits start in the beginning and get more and more, or making her(the operator) try to not transform while transforming others.

This makes no sense. What about the 'one thing'? And the animals traits did start at the beginning of most TFs, and get more and more. That's how TFs work...


Alright, some tips back at you. If you're going to expect people to study your definition list to even understand your reviews, maybe you should put in the effort to proofread your reviews. The grammar, spelling, and some conceptual points were a total mess. Also, I'm not even sure which words you've "invented" new definitions for; it would probably work better if you included the utilized definitions in the review, either inline or as numbered footnotes. (That's assuming you need your own custom definitions at all, which is doubtful).

Btw 7/10 without context means nothing to me. On RottenTomatoes.com, that's a fairly poor review. On Metacritic.com, that's a damn good review.


That being said, the point about too much sex instead of TF reactions is worth bringing up with my friends...

Sorry. I forced myself to make this review and yeah it does not make much sense. I don't have the power to explain what I mean here so lets us just ignore this one.

No BS, you're one of my elite 4 favorite TF artists, becumming was awesome, your ability to bring body-language and expressions together in the midst of a morph is fantastic. I understand not needing EVERY panel to be full pinup, but I appreciated that extra toil nonetheless, it was more immersive for the reader. I really wanna tell you to go ahead and up the ante with the kinks, but i'd be afraid to alienate some of the more vanilla furs so you really gotta do a crowd gauge i guess. Still for just personal feedback purposes:

I love the multiboob, never lose it. Light microplay is glorious and adds to the sense of powerlessness that is SO exciting about the stories you tell, i'd pay to see more of it. Moar penetration! Perhaps by moar ferals? Lactation and tittygrowth go paw in paw in my book. I liked the herm kitty, totally cool with more of that sorta thing. A little bit of bondage could really tie things together (I'm sorry). More cum! It's easier to believe these ladies are gripped by uncontrollable lust when you can see it dripping or getting things like clothing articles or seats wet. And I LOVE seeing someone's nipples toyed with. Especially when they've been freshly grown or enlarged.

You've got some dope talent, I know not why you devote it to better our fapping experience but god damn I love you for it.

P.S. Are those animated picture projects gonna get off the ground? That would be a game changer. Especially if instead of animating a whole exhausting sequence you just slip in a short or looping animation in here and there into key panels. You could charge anything you want, then. ANYTHING.