Hello, Commander. #XCOM GROUP COMMISH SPECIAL# (CLOSED!)
10 years ago
"In response to the alien threat, this council of nations has chosen to activate the XCOM PROJECT."
21/01 EDIT: Holy shizz, the slots went fast! Totally didn't expect them to be filled this quickly, so to accommodate some extra interest from others, I'm going to 'Long War' this bish up and it'll be seven to eight main characters, plus Jax. I will be running a second one of these though very soon!
22/01 EDIT: Calling this closed now, thanks everyone for your interest, and don't worry, will be opening up two more themed comms in two weeks time!
Yes, for those that managed to deduce from the paraphrased words used in my previous journal, from one of the XCOM: Enemy Unknown trailers, I am indeed going to be offering something I'm particularly excited about: My first group story commission of any kind and one that is XCOM themed - a series / franchise that I'm very passionate about. I'm looking for SIX bold anthros to step forward in the cause of defending the homeworld from the invading alien threat. I'm also looking for those wanting to fill out a handful of cameo / side roles. These six main characters will form the squad / fireteam that will embark on a dangerous mission. It may be one to thwart a terror attack, a UFO landing, or raiding an alien base. That I will ask for votes and preferences on - just what kind of mission you'd like me to tell a story about. Because this is a group commission and it's a first try, I'm going to selling the slots cheaply, $5 for each of the six main characters, and $2 for a cameo role. What would these cameo roles be? There'll be a bit of preamble and scene-setting before the main action scene and that's where those wishing to be other soldiers on the base catching a little R&R, scientists, engineers, XCOM comms staff and of course, someone to fill the boots of Central Officer Bradford communicating with the squad on the field. Each of the cameo roles will get a nice bit of literary limelight. But of course, it's the main six that will get the lion's share dished up equally between them.
Did I mention too that the squad will be commanded by none other than Major Jax Valkyr, my battlesharkysona? So there's an added incentive, Jax fans.
As a courtesy to my lovely watchers, I want to open this up to you first before offering the slots publically. If it proves popular enough, then I'll do more than one of these. This is primarily aimed at fans of the franchise but those new to it but curious, worry not! I'll ensure that you get plenty of context and it'll be an enjoyable action-packed blast to read and see your 'sona or OC star in. And don't worry, this won't be some quick and flimsy story, it'll be respectively large to make sure that everyone gets their own moment to shine. At least 4000 words. I'm going to put no limit on species, but just ask you to consider your sona in the context of the genre and military action movie nature of how the meat of the story will be written.
But that's not all! To aid you, I'm going to list some character archetypes and you can nominate one of them that you wish your 'sona/OC to slot into:
#1 The Joker
#2 The Silent and Brooding Type
#3 The One Eager for Glory
#4 The One who Dies Heroically
#5 The One with a Grudge / Seeks Revenge
#6 The Loose Cannon
These are just guides though! Please feel free to define how you want your character portrayed. Also, what as! Sniper, Assault, Support, MEC Trooper, Genemodded, etc. It might also be useful to get some idea of what era in the invasion you'd prefer this first one to take place: At the beginning with a relatively fresh team, midway through the invasion when the first MECs and Genemods appear, or battle-hardened and super-badasses towards the end. Let me know.
Just to sum up - SIX main character slots @ $5 each, and lets say...FIVE cameo slots @$2 each. You'll be under the command of my favourite battlesharky, Jax Valkyr. There'll be rich description, witty banter and moments of humour, suspense and plenty of intense XCOM action. Comment below and join the defense of Anthro-Earth.
This will be mixed in with my new worklog finally starting at the end of this week, providing I have enough initial interest without needing to open it up publicly. I'd love watchers and friends to fill these spots.
And finally, last thing I promise, this is also a watcher courtesy - pre-public offering of new Q&D slots. I'm sure you're all familiar with what I do now, the usual $20 Quick and Dirty fetish and adult stories, so if anyone else would like new ones of those before I open up publicly again, also comment below. I have a few new January comms on my new worklist already from Mephis, Attack1942, HSR01, so you'll be queued in after those.
So yeah, those interested, get commentin'!
21/01 EDIT: Holy shizz, the slots went fast! Totally didn't expect them to be filled this quickly, so to accommodate some extra interest from others, I'm going to 'Long War' this bish up and it'll be seven to eight main characters, plus Jax. I will be running a second one of these though very soon!
22/01 EDIT: Calling this closed now, thanks everyone for your interest, and don't worry, will be opening up two more themed comms in two weeks time!
Yes, for those that managed to deduce from the paraphrased words used in my previous journal, from one of the XCOM: Enemy Unknown trailers, I am indeed going to be offering something I'm particularly excited about: My first group story commission of any kind and one that is XCOM themed - a series / franchise that I'm very passionate about. I'm looking for SIX bold anthros to step forward in the cause of defending the homeworld from the invading alien threat. I'm also looking for those wanting to fill out a handful of cameo / side roles. These six main characters will form the squad / fireteam that will embark on a dangerous mission. It may be one to thwart a terror attack, a UFO landing, or raiding an alien base. That I will ask for votes and preferences on - just what kind of mission you'd like me to tell a story about. Because this is a group commission and it's a first try, I'm going to selling the slots cheaply, $5 for each of the six main characters, and $2 for a cameo role. What would these cameo roles be? There'll be a bit of preamble and scene-setting before the main action scene and that's where those wishing to be other soldiers on the base catching a little R&R, scientists, engineers, XCOM comms staff and of course, someone to fill the boots of Central Officer Bradford communicating with the squad on the field. Each of the cameo roles will get a nice bit of literary limelight. But of course, it's the main six that will get the lion's share dished up equally between them.
Did I mention too that the squad will be commanded by none other than Major Jax Valkyr, my battlesharkysona? So there's an added incentive, Jax fans.
As a courtesy to my lovely watchers, I want to open this up to you first before offering the slots publically. If it proves popular enough, then I'll do more than one of these. This is primarily aimed at fans of the franchise but those new to it but curious, worry not! I'll ensure that you get plenty of context and it'll be an enjoyable action-packed blast to read and see your 'sona or OC star in. And don't worry, this won't be some quick and flimsy story, it'll be respectively large to make sure that everyone gets their own moment to shine. At least 4000 words. I'm going to put no limit on species, but just ask you to consider your sona in the context of the genre and military action movie nature of how the meat of the story will be written.
But that's not all! To aid you, I'm going to list some character archetypes and you can nominate one of them that you wish your 'sona/OC to slot into:
#1 The Joker
#2 The Silent and Brooding Type
#3 The One Eager for Glory
#4 The One who Dies Heroically
#5 The One with a Grudge / Seeks Revenge
#6 The Loose Cannon
These are just guides though! Please feel free to define how you want your character portrayed. Also, what as! Sniper, Assault, Support, MEC Trooper, Genemodded, etc. It might also be useful to get some idea of what era in the invasion you'd prefer this first one to take place: At the beginning with a relatively fresh team, midway through the invasion when the first MECs and Genemods appear, or battle-hardened and super-badasses towards the end. Let me know.
Just to sum up - SIX main character slots @ $5 each, and lets say...FIVE cameo slots @$2 each. You'll be under the command of my favourite battlesharky, Jax Valkyr. There'll be rich description, witty banter and moments of humour, suspense and plenty of intense XCOM action. Comment below and join the defense of Anthro-Earth.
This will be mixed in with my new worklog finally starting at the end of this week, providing I have enough initial interest without needing to open it up publicly. I'd love watchers and friends to fill these spots.
And finally, last thing I promise, this is also a watcher courtesy - pre-public offering of new Q&D slots. I'm sure you're all familiar with what I do now, the usual $20 Quick and Dirty fetish and adult stories, so if anyone else would like new ones of those before I open up publicly again, also comment below. I have a few new January comms on my new worklist already from Mephis, Attack1942, HSR01, so you'll be queued in after those.
So yeah, those interested, get commentin'!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/9baon56lb.....etter.png?dl=0
I picked Alex's full name from the ref sheet you uploaded, if you'd like me to use a different one, I'll happily change it. Do you have a preference for a nickname / callsign for her by the way? If not, I'll pick one.
You can send the $5 to jinxcuri@gmail.com, and thank you again for participating.
Oh, callsigns and ranks will be revealed in that next chap!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/7yo1lul2s.....ction.pdf?dl=0
And more you shall have, very soon!
Thanks to additional kindness on the part of those involved, the main action-packed meat of the story following the introduction and prior to the epilogue will now be a solid two chapters rather than one, with the second being an extended chapter. Above is a finished draft of the first for you to run your eye over and let me know what you think.
Next chapter is where all the badassery kicks in!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ccrmgud4l.....etter.png?dl=0
You can send the $5 to jinxcuri@gmail.com, and thank you again for being a part of it!
Oh, callsigns and ranks will be revealed in that next chap!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/7yo1lul2s.....ction.pdf?dl=0
(accidentally misclicked and hid your first comment, apologies ^^;)
Thanks to additional kindness on the part of those involved, the main action-packed meat of the story following the introduction and prior to the epilogue will now be a solid two chapters rather than one, with the second being an extended chapter. Above is a finished draft of the first for you to run your eye over and let me know what you think.
Next chapter is where all the badassery kicks in!
You've done a story for Sigma before:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16765580/
ref sheet
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16765606/
Shows him more in action.
He's a short fennec fox, great at stealth and covert ops. Sneaking behind enemy lines, sabotaging equipment, or just scouting ahead unseen. What he lacks in muscle, he makes up for in speed and stealth! He's a bit of a rebel sometimes, preferring to get his own way, but follows orders from superiors. I think he'd make a good support, seeing as he'd be able to quickly get himself and others out of sticky situations.
He'd be familiar with firearms, but would probably prefer hand-to-hand or more melee-based weaponry where his speed and stature would give him the upper hand.
Does that work?
You've got slot #3! A fennec fox would be a great stealthy-scout type and I'm totally happy to work in a hand-to-hand or melee style combat, maybe equipped with a pistol too, just in case? Thanks for the personality details. Are you familiar with the XCOM games? Do you have any kind of preferences as to the kind of enemy you'll be going up against. And once everything is finalised and I'm ready to begin, I'll send you payment deets over. ^_^
Sounds good! send me a note or add me on Skype sometime. I'm on skype more than FA haha.
Thanks again and can't wait!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/c3346iliv.....etter.png?dl=0
If you'd prefer Sigma to have a different last name, please let me know and I'll edit it and remember for the actual story. Do you have a favoured nickname or callsign you'd prefer me to use with him btw?
You can send the $5 to jinxcuri@gmail.com, and thanks for participating!
Also, his full name is Sigma Stroud
Oh, callsigns and ranks will be revealed in that next chap!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/7yo1lul2s.....ction.pdf?dl=0
Added Stroud in the story, and will get you an edited acceptance fluff letter too!
Thanks to additional kindness on the part of those involved, the main action-packed meat of the story following the introduction and prior to the epilogue will now be a solid two chapters rather than one, with the second being an extended chapter. Above is a finished draft of the first for you to run your eye over and let me know what you think.
Next chapter is where all the badassery kicks in!
The only character to nominate that I have is Furian for slot #5, possibly #6. He's a beast that certainly holds grudges and will spend a lot of effort to even the score. Despite the bestial nature he would be loyal to his team and put himself in harms way if it was required. The mission shall be completed no matter the cost and you better believe he'd do as much damage as possible to the aliens.
For the class profile I would think either Assault, or Heavy Weapon.
With the extra appendages that adorn his werewolf frame I'm not sure if you'd want to call that 'genemodded' or not, I'd be happy in the early to mid campaign.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18114766/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17164154/
Ooh, as for the extra appendages, do they have prehensile dexterity and strength to manipulate objects and hold them?
Favorite kind of enemy? The juicier the better. Loves the splatters. No real preference on the species but the thin men and the grey men are fun (I can't remember the names) to pick off and make go running.
Yes, the tentacles are fully prehensile and are made of nearly solid muscle except for the plumbing inside. There is a lot of dexterity and a lot of strength. Just ask his prey <.<
I'll be starting it this weekend, so you can send $5 to jinxcuri@gmail.com, and thanks again for participating.
Love the letter as well!
Oh, callsigns and ranks will be revealed in that next chap!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/7yo1lul2s.....ction.pdf?dl=0
Oh, it means 'Displacer'. xD I'm fond of adding in little puns, references, or easter eggs for people to uncover in my stories.
As I mentioned in my note to you, the main action-packed meat of the story following the introduction and prior to the epilogue will now be a solid two chapters rather than one, with the second being an extended chapter. Above is a finished draft of the first of those two chapters for you to run your eye over and let me know what you think.
Next chapter is where all the badassery kicks in!
Nice to see this taking shape. I would love to claim a spot on the main roster as well~
These roles are all so juicy... I think I mix it this time a bit up, and would offer Kish to be the loose cannon. Loyal to the XCOM project, of course. But more bloodthirsty than it might be comfortable - she finds this whole alien war thrilling, having quickly developed a profound hate for the extraterrestrieal threat - and EXALT as well, which would make for a nice dynamic and distrust towards Liam.
Regarding the class and fighting style, Assault would probably fit her best. Either close and personal with a shotgun (plus grenades for when something is in the way. Also, she loves explosions), or, if available already in regards to technology, a well armored MEC Trooper with a Minigun and a kinetic punch module. The more carnage, the better in her eyes~ She does not really fear or care for changes to her body, as long as it helps the war - and helps her satisfy her hate.
Regarding the general time the story takes place, I would say more towards the beginning, the overwhelming and unknown enemy.
Regarding the refs, I guess these would be mostly for the other commenters x3
Nonetheless, here they are (I need a proper refsheet)~
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17112924/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17605297/ (to the right)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18103786/
Really looking forward to how this evolves, sharky. I adore the idea
https://www.dropbox.com/s/b1czsvdr9.....etter.png?dl=0
You can send the $5 to jinxcuri@gmail.com, as I'll be starting it this weekend! :D
And that letter is amazing. Reporting for Duty, Commander~ *salutes*
Thanks to additional kindness on the part of those involved, the main action-packed meat of the story following the introduction and prior to the epilogue will now be a solid two chapters rather than one, with the second being an extended chapter. Above is a finished draft of the first of those two for you to run your eye over and let me know what you think.
Next chapter is where all the badassery kicks in!
Just perfect, as I am used to from your work~
I'd also like to jump back in the queue for another Q&D story. ^.^
Will be starting it this weekend, and thanks again for participation.
Oh, callsigns and ranks will be revealed in that next chap!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/7yo1lul2s.....ction.pdf?dl=0
I don't know why, but I immediately had an image of Kellan with a Jamaican accent, I hope that works. xD His boastful nature gets more chance to shine in the next chap!
Thanks to additional kindness on the part of those involved, the main action-packed meat of the story following the introduction and prior to the epilogue will now be a solid two chapters rather than one, with the second being an extended chapter. Above is a finished draft of the first of those two for you to run your eye over and let me know what you think.
Next chapter is where all the badassery kicks in!
$5 to jinxcuri[at]gmail.com when you're ready, since I'll be starting it this weekend. ^^
Paid! c:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/he8qt1bb3.....etter.png?dl=0
Thanks to additional kindness on the part of those involved, the main action-packed meat of the story following the introduction and prior to the epilogue will now be a solid two chapters rather than one, with the second being an extended chapter. Above is a finished draft of the first for you to run your eye over and let me know what you think.
Next chapter is where all the badassery kicks in!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/x5jtg9xfv.....etter.png?dl=0
Any callsign/nickname pref for you for the actual story? Will be starting it this weekend.
Thanks to additional kindness on the part of those involved, the main action-packed meat of the story following the introduction and prior to the epilogue will now be a solid two chapters rather than one, with the second being an extended chapter. Above is a finished draft of the first for you to run your eye over and let me know what you think.
Next chapter is where all the badassery kicks in!