XCOM GROUP COMM NEW UPDATE - 'Turning the Tide Part I'
9 years ago
Phew. This is pretty much hot off the press and has only gone through a cursory editing pass so there may be spelling or grammar errors to corrected - ignore them for now, I'll pick them up. But yis, to make it easier for those involved in my first group commission to find it and comment, I'll leave a link to the first half of the 'action chapter'. Its the first time I've written one of this scale before and had to juggle this many characters around, so tried my best to spread it out fairly amongst everyone, so hopefully I've done okay! The action isn't over yet though, there'll be another like it following this one and haven't played all my cinematic action scene cards yet. Please let me know if there's anything you're not happy about with it or would like changing.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/wsw1vz4e9.....t%20I.pdf?dl=0
Additional note: I'll be tinkering with the battle scene more, so this is very much a first draft.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/wsw1vz4e9.....t%20I.pdf?dl=0
Additional note: I'll be tinkering with the battle scene more, so this is very much a first draft.
I think the combat is great in this chapter, it really shows off each of our characters really well and allows us to shine in our own special moments. The interplay between the characters is really nice too, throughout the entire story so far.