You just want someone to read over the story after the pacifist ending of Undertale? I mean I can do that, I'd have to find some time to squeeze it in as I do have quite a few things on my schedule lately. But if it's not very lengthy even better and more chances I'd get to have a gander.

Including the highlighted revision notes I wrote for myself, the whole thing is about 2700 words at the moment. So no the first half isn't all that long all things considered. XD

https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....it?usp=sharing

For anyone else that may be considering clicking on that URL. Near complete spoilers for the ending of the Pacifist route and it's major plot twist lay therein. Do not read if you have any intention of playing Undertale in the near future.