I personally don't know? It looks nice for me, in matters of animation and all. As long as I don't look on their faces - lack of emotion changes is the only thing that bothers me, to which, I suppose, you just didn't had the time to work on before you put the project on hold.

Faces are pretty much the last thing I do when I animate.

Well that's expectable and pretty much logical. But overall, I don't really know if you can improve anything else here. Pose, movement animation and cumshot itself looks good, though I wonder how the looks will change with different artwork style used. Would be easier to do the judging while comparing variants, dunno.

Hmm i like the artwork of it. I was expecting Zara to smirk or respond to the load of cum on her face.

In case you didn't notice, it's not finished. It wont be, either, since I'm gonna start anew.

Slightly unrelated but what are the chances of a revisit to the gooper blooper flash? I'd love a scene where it keeps on fucking with that belly full before pulling out.

Just a little idea <3

The chances of that are pretty much nonexistant. I think the art in this is outdated, so going back to that would kill me.

Well, I personally believe that you should do whatever it is that you personally feel like doing that you enjoy. So the fact you wouldn't want to go back to do it, means I wouldn't want you to force yourself to do it. So, if you want to start from scratch to make this "Butt Bus", then I support you all the way. But if you don't really want to, then I'd rather you didn't, and focused more o stuff you really want to do. =D

I want to do this though.

If you want to do it, then I look forward to seeing you do it. Regardless of what anyone else says, as long as you enjoyed making the art, I will enjoy the art being supplied! =D

To be honest, it just seems a little boring of a concept to me. It's just heterosexual sex on a bus. At least it's not vaginal sex again.

hwaet

It looks fine to me but if you're not happy with it sometimes its best just to abandon an old idea so you can focus on new ones. But save it somewhere, old forgotten work can sometimes spark new ideas when being looked at with new eyes

It's not the idea. It's the art itself.

Wow that looks great even in this unfinished state, you have to realise as a creator you gonna see your own work completely different than the rest of us, if you have to make radical changes, do it as soon as you can before the actual project getting any further, or else gonna be more harder to add changes later.

well, that's why I want to start over. I can't change it anymore without breaking it.

It feels a bit rushed looking,if that makes any sense.

It's quite the opposite, I put a lot of work into this.

No i don't mean the effort you put into this,i mean the animation itself feels like it should have some pacing.

It's one of the things I'm worst at, indeed.

for a old wip, still looks damn good but its understandable you don't wanna finish it.

After looking i aggre i prefer the old art better

What? I never said I liked the old art better, I said I wanted to remake it so it looks better.

Yea i hope that goes good

Honestly as a WIP that looks like it could have been one of your best pieces yet to me, its more 3d than a lot of your other stuff if that makes sense.

If this sucks compared to whats coming, i'm very excited to see what you pull out. Giggity

Well, I don't know that yet, but I hope it will. As it is now, it's somewhat clunky to work with. Another reason I wanted to start over.

are you going to release the fla file of the unfinished version so others can use it, because it would be such a waist to just trash all that work you did, to be honest it's really good so far, and other people might be able to finish it as an alternate version from your revised masterpiece that your working on.

I really doubt they'd be able to. It's really complex, nothing anybody else should try to complete.