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Nisteiróiras Species (criticism needed)
9 years ago
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Hello watchers, I dont make a jornal often do I?
Well, Im experimenting with writing and producing my own species (more exactly, a morph mutating parasyte), and would very much appreciate criticism on the file! You dont have to be a writer to comment, just send me your personal feedback <3
The backstory is here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20388440/
The visual file is here:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20393214/
Thanks dearies <3
PS: If the aproval rating on it is high, I will consider doing freebies on it!
Well, Im experimenting with writing and producing my own species (more exactly, a morph mutating parasyte), and would very much appreciate criticism on the file! You dont have to be a writer to comment, just send me your personal feedback <3
The backstory is here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20388440/
The visual file is here:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20393214/
Thanks dearies <3
PS: If the aproval rating on it is high, I will consider doing freebies on it!
KishinLynx
~kishinlynx
Sounds weird xD Love weird stuffs :3 looking forward to see the visual x3
NotAMockingBird
~notamockingbird
OP
Thanks! Its was posted just now!
BlueSeiryuu
~blueseiryuu
I'm a writer, so I don't really have many comments on your visual file, maybe for the backstory, talk about the most common host species, maybe talk about the impacts on the host brain and behaviour a little more - otherwise it was an excellent read! For both the writer and biologist/bioengineer in me!
NotAMockingBird
~notamockingbird
OP
Wow thanks! I'm planning to elaborate on the neurological effects on Stage B hosts and will take your feedback in consideration, thanks very much!
BlueSeiryuu
~blueseiryuu
Not a problem! Send me a shout with an updated backstory and I'd be delighted to read again~
