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9 years ago
In some galaxy, In a time and place out of sync with our own, there is a moment, a moment that changes everything in some continuums, and nothing in others. This focal point event has happened to beings that do, and yet don’t exist, This is the story of one such being, in the universe,
//...Wake up....//
//...Wake up Graduate Anubii...// |
“Nrgh…”
The young Avali slid off his bed, landing on the floor.
“G’morning S.A.I.L.” Said the avali as he got up. While he stumbled to his dorm’s washroom he asked his Student-based Artificial Intelligence Lattice what the time was.
// Your uniform is available inside your locker Anubii. It is impressive that you can remain so calm and serene while running late for your own graduation. // |
“...Damnit.”
I am loookin for a someone to help me correct y mistakes and reword some sentences that soud wrong.
Let me know wht you think!
STARBOUND//...Wake up....//
//...Wake up Graduate Anubii...// |
“Nrgh…”
The young Avali slid off his bed, landing on the floor.
“G’morning S.A.I.L.” Said the avali as he got up. While he stumbled to his dorm’s washroom he asked his Student-based Artificial Intelligence Lattice what the time was.
// Your uniform is available inside your locker Anubii. It is impressive that you can remain so calm and serene while running late for your own graduation. // |
“...Damnit.”
I am loookin for a someone to help me correct y mistakes and reword some sentences that soud wrong.
Let me know wht you think!
