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Two Reviews For Yous
9 years ago
Or "Twos Reviews Foos Yous" if you really want to keep that rhyming going!
The following are two reviews that
Felthry and 
Taonas-Deridran wrote about my recent story!
~~~
Felthry:
Everyone knows that snakes are good, right?
And everyone knows that cocks are good too.
This implies, of course, that snakecocks are double good.
Everyone also knows that Amethystine is an amazing writer, yes?
And everyone knows that long stories by amazing authors are good.
And of course everyone knows that transformation is good.
It is also an undisputed fact that unconventional body layouts are good.
So how does a novel-length story by Amethystine about snakecocks, transformation, and generally weird body plans sound? Quadruple good, no? Maybe even quintuple good? How about you go give this a look and decide for yourself?
So I've been reading this lately (full disclosure: Amethystine gave me a copy to review free of charge) and I have to say, it really is excellent. I have no complaints about the writing style, which is (as is usual for Amethystine) excellent, and my one and only complaint would be the inclusion of several turn-offs of mine, but of course that same part I would complain about would be someone else's favorite part; "there's something for everyone" really does apply here.
Of course the focus is snakecocks, but there are many many different variations on that theme in the story, keeping it interesting the whole way through. Amethystine explores a vast space of possibilities--if you're thinking "well I wonder if he included this snakecock-themed idea" then chances are the answer's yes. Yes, even that. There have been several cases as I read it where I thought "surely this isn't going in that direction..." followed by "oh, well, I guess it did."
It starts out fairly tame (as tame as the daily life of a gargoyle and her snakecock can be, anyway) and gets progressively weirder and weirder as it goes on.
Overall, absolutely would recommend.
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Taonas: [WARNING, SOME SLIGHT, MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD]
I appreciated the entire first part that introduced the twins to the reader. Without part one, this could just simply be an incredibly long orgy story. I always appreciate it when writers put character development into the story so that it isn't just mindless pleasuring. If I can get to know the characters, then I can become more immersed in the story. I could almost put myself into Pylt's or Poke's position in the story. Admittedly, I preferred Poke's position, because, cocksnake! ^.^
The title of the story: at first I took it as them trying to fit into society. By the end, it seemed to have a double meaning, which included the above and possibly referring to all of the people physically fitting into certain orifices. Either way, quite fitting.
The ending was mind-blowing, and I'm not just talking about people being converted into cum and then being blown across the room. For a little while there, I was a bit disappointed that Pylt and Poke hadn't transformed at all while everyone else around them went through every conceivable CTF imaginable. When they did start transforming, it just got better and better.
The story did get pretty crazy there at the end, but I like crazy. I can only imagine how much pleasure would be felt by dozens of people sharing the intense feeling of orgasming in that situation. I was pleased that it was all reversible in the end. I think I also sympathized with how hard the twins had it in their original form and could only imagine how the world would react to all of those conjoined people from the party rejoining society.
Great story, well worth the money, and definitely worth a couple more read-throughs once I recover from the first encounter. If I could, I would definitely visit that party without hesitation and without care of what form I leave in. This has inspired me to try and write my own cocksnake transformation story, even if it won't be anywhere near as amazing or as long.
So yea, 10 out of 10 rating, definitely the book to read if you want to know what it's like to be a serpentine shaft capable of making all the males jealous.
~~~~~
To buy: https://gum.co/HQWfG
To see more info and testimonials: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/7871323/
The following are two reviews that
Felthry and 
Taonas-Deridran wrote about my recent story!~~~
Felthry:
Everyone knows that snakes are good, right?
And everyone knows that cocks are good too.
This implies, of course, that snakecocks are double good.
Everyone also knows that Amethystine is an amazing writer, yes?
And everyone knows that long stories by amazing authors are good.
And of course everyone knows that transformation is good.
It is also an undisputed fact that unconventional body layouts are good.
So how does a novel-length story by Amethystine about snakecocks, transformation, and generally weird body plans sound? Quadruple good, no? Maybe even quintuple good? How about you go give this a look and decide for yourself?
So I've been reading this lately (full disclosure: Amethystine gave me a copy to review free of charge) and I have to say, it really is excellent. I have no complaints about the writing style, which is (as is usual for Amethystine) excellent, and my one and only complaint would be the inclusion of several turn-offs of mine, but of course that same part I would complain about would be someone else's favorite part; "there's something for everyone" really does apply here.
Of course the focus is snakecocks, but there are many many different variations on that theme in the story, keeping it interesting the whole way through. Amethystine explores a vast space of possibilities--if you're thinking "well I wonder if he included this snakecock-themed idea" then chances are the answer's yes. Yes, even that. There have been several cases as I read it where I thought "surely this isn't going in that direction..." followed by "oh, well, I guess it did."
It starts out fairly tame (as tame as the daily life of a gargoyle and her snakecock can be, anyway) and gets progressively weirder and weirder as it goes on.
Overall, absolutely would recommend.
~~~~~~~
Taonas: [WARNING, SOME SLIGHT, MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD]
I appreciated the entire first part that introduced the twins to the reader. Without part one, this could just simply be an incredibly long orgy story. I always appreciate it when writers put character development into the story so that it isn't just mindless pleasuring. If I can get to know the characters, then I can become more immersed in the story. I could almost put myself into Pylt's or Poke's position in the story. Admittedly, I preferred Poke's position, because, cocksnake! ^.^
The title of the story: at first I took it as them trying to fit into society. By the end, it seemed to have a double meaning, which included the above and possibly referring to all of the people physically fitting into certain orifices. Either way, quite fitting.
The ending was mind-blowing, and I'm not just talking about people being converted into cum and then being blown across the room. For a little while there, I was a bit disappointed that Pylt and Poke hadn't transformed at all while everyone else around them went through every conceivable CTF imaginable. When they did start transforming, it just got better and better.
The story did get pretty crazy there at the end, but I like crazy. I can only imagine how much pleasure would be felt by dozens of people sharing the intense feeling of orgasming in that situation. I was pleased that it was all reversible in the end. I think I also sympathized with how hard the twins had it in their original form and could only imagine how the world would react to all of those conjoined people from the party rejoining society.
Great story, well worth the money, and definitely worth a couple more read-throughs once I recover from the first encounter. If I could, I would definitely visit that party without hesitation and without care of what form I leave in. This has inspired me to try and write my own cocksnake transformation story, even if it won't be anywhere near as amazing or as long.
So yea, 10 out of 10 rating, definitely the book to read if you want to know what it's like to be a serpentine shaft capable of making all the males jealous.
~~~~~
To buy: https://gum.co/HQWfG
To see more info and testimonials: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/7871323/
(With the upcoming election, I couldn't help but say that lol)