Critique Me
8 years ago
Commissions! : TOS : Tumblr : Twitter Hey, I'd like to get some feedback on my recent stuff. As any artist who wants to be stronger, I'm very interested in what you might have to say. All art from the califur horror badges to now - what am I doing wrong, what am I doing right? How to improve? Lay it on me, I'd like to hear it if you've got some honest, constructive criticism to share.
Please provide links to the art you are reviewing so I know which pieces you are referring to.
Please provide links to the art you are reviewing so I know which pieces you are referring to.
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all I can say is I love your art an to me it looks spot on ^ ^
I may not "know" art~ but I know what I like ^ ^
I suppose my critique would be keep be mindful of perspectives and shading, pay attention to anatomy and don't make your jizz look like chunky mayonnaise. You seemed to have those down pact so good job! :D
I see TM69 got updated a few times though I haven't seen any notifications of it on FA to say "hey! page updated!"
But that's only a guess as to wby that thing hasn't gotten the attention it deserves.
I'd say your FA momentum took a hit most likely to your 'hiatus', but it's for the best reason you could ask for; you had a ton of work outside FA. THAT'S great. I love hearing that over the other people who are making journals saying they're about to be evicted and can't afford pizza.
I'd definitely ask Big Z how they stay relevant and promote themselves between their gaps in released animation and art. Maybe even post drawings or doodles that reference your comics so people get sucked in a click hole out of curiosity. But really since you're back from cons and already have a few commissions out of the way I expect things to ramp up to how they were before.
I think Z does short animated podcast like update vids but then they're tweeting and drawing things here and there as well. It's a bit different for me because I have the alt and can only space out my time so much between them. It's hard to find that balance.
Your primary can flip-flop; when you get a big job, that's the breadwinner hands-down. But beyond that, do you feel Nastacula works are your primary focus, or are SFW things your primary focus? I think many people make their porn accounts their "porn alts" that aren't their main focus, but you definitely find this type of work both entertaining and important.
Either way it seems suit making is currently your hobby-tier medium.
I really do think your NSFW stuff is better than your SFW art because you seem to go into it un-hinged and it looks like you're less worried about what's popular, what will get more views, and what won't be viewed as too controversial for mainstream audiences. I can't tell what it's like drawing from your perspective, but it certainly SEEMS like you're a bit more free with your expression with Nastacula art, and I think Minibell will be a good place to keep that furry porn account "freedom of expression" while not having to pidgeon-hole your efforts in an exclusively pornographic manner.
That's all just a wordy way of saying "I think you do just fine with how you're doing it now". You have multiple worthwhile angles to choose from, and you can really switch to either of them at any given time. You're "a master of none, but pretty fuckin' great at some".
You're a fantastic artist, I love all of your stuff already and can't wait to see you get even better!
Looking good, keep on making amazing art!