Criticism?
8 years ago
General
I’d like to ask my followers, do you guys have any criticism for my “art”?
Also to clarify, i mean like anything i can improve on in my “art” i.e. anatomy,shading or whatever else involved in the process
Also to clarify, i mean like anything i can improve on in my “art” i.e. anatomy,shading or whatever else involved in the process
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Another thing you do that is based on proportion is giving a lady a body that is too short, or legs that are too long. The length of body from the shoulder to the crotch tends to be around the same length as the length from the crotch to the feet.
So I'd say proportions is the main thing to look out for if you want to refine something. Though that's mostly what I could spot. A lot else from your drawings are really good. And even the proportion thing felt more like a type of style most times. But other times... yeah.
I think i might disagree with that, body from shoulder to crotch is shorter then crotch to feet, even if going until the ankles.
But you are spot on with the thin waist and torso and indeed the recent regular show picture, looking at it i definitely messed up the rib cage shape.
Though i tend to make the top smaller compared to the hips and legs since it's just something that appeals to me, and it's a bit of a habit.
RML Definitely agree that i should experiment with different proportions, certain proportions when drawing smut i will not go into, at least the overly obese ones or ludicrous ones.
Though certain habits i tend to lean on a lot like the thin waist or small torso, but i'll try not get stuck in them too much.
And thanks for the critique, appreciate it!