I haven't played the game myself, so I'm not perhaps the best person to comment.

However, having read many reviews before, I'd say that the rest of the review was better than the intro. Instead of talking about the nasty girl crispifying people you could've perhaps given a more overall description of the game world and plotline - maybe a word or two about whether the game manages to keep up the player's attention and curiosity. If you want to describe a single cutscene, in my opinion it would be better to say only little and with as well-thought words as possible. It will encourage the reader's imagination.

I think it's good that you approached the game from various aspects such as the game's atmosphere, gameplay, graphics, the amout of gore and so on... It is essential to bring out the pros and cons. I think you did a good job. =)