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Gazelle's story is now in the revising phase
7 years ago
Hello peeps. Been struggling to keep my head above water with a job that pays me in peanuts and wondering how I'm going to be able to pay rent. But let's move onto what you guys want to know more about -- at least I assume it's what you want to know about, since you're following me in the first place.
I've spent the last... I don't know, 3 or 4 weeks writing about Gazelle taking a dump while she has cameras in her toilet feeding the footage to an online account of hers so viewers can watch. What I initially panned to be a quick ten page story has escalated to a whopping 27 pages and 15K word count. I seriously don't know why I keep doing this to myself, but that's just how it is. I might end up cutting a fair portion of it after my proofreader gives his evaluation of it, but that's a bridge I'll cross later. Since it's going to take a while, I figured I'd leave you guys with not only a preview for the story, but also tell you that I might start uploading some quickies to my scraps folder in the meantime. Yeah, I actually wrote a couple drabbles that weren't several pages long just for practice, and they're kind of gathering dust, so I might as well do something with them.
For now, here's a quick look at what Gazelle's story is going to contain:
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Pressing the button the instant the time showed 10:30, the button changed to a bright green and the words Live flashed across the top of the screen. A moment later, she saw the same sight as before, her midriff and everything below it from the side, and her chest from inside the bowl. A few seconds later, the busy chat jumped in activity, everyone in attendance greeting their beloved performer for the evening.
Xtra_ToppingZ: So, you still haven’t quite made it into space yet?
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: No, still working in accounting at the moment. I’m keeping an ear to the ground for any opportunity that lets me get a foot in the door to be an astronaut though. Hooves crossed! /)(\
Xtra_ToppingZ: /)(\
Earn_Your_Stripes: We’re rooting for ya. Hope you make it to the stars some day.
Duh-Nuh: Hey, look who just got here!
Snowy_Anchor: Our mistress hath arrived!
Zuburu_22: Pants unzipped.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: Same.
Xtra_ToppingZ: Same
Snowy_Anchor: I wasn’t wearing pants to begin with.
Earn_Your_Stripes: What are clothes?
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: They’re the things Smelly_Ms_Thomson’s wearing, and they’re cute! Love your top, “Troublemaker!” ;3
Xtra_ToppingZ: I’m more focused on the shorts she’s wearing. How are those things fitting around her massive butt?
Gazelle’s teeth sunk into her bottom lip in excitement upon reading how eager her followers were to see she, “Smelly_Ms_Thomson” had finally made it. She was even excited that they liked her outfit of choice. Even though she was itching to get started, she couldn’t resist the need to chat with her audience a bit before things got started.
Smelly_Ms_Thomson: Oh, you guys are so sweet! These aren’t even that nice of clothes, I got them for cheap at GoodWolf.
Zuburu_22: Hey, no worries; some clothes never go out of style.
Duh-Nuh: nothing wrong with GoodWolf, I shop there too. Helps me save money for more important things than wearing expensive trending clothing.
Snowy_Anchor: You mean like more porn?
Duh-Nuh: Well yeah, what’s more important than that?
Earn_Your_Stripes: I hear that!
Smelly_Ms_Thomson: lmao You guys crack me up. But speaking of crack, mine is BUSTING to let out what I’ve been holding in, so I’m gonna have to get started soon or I’m gonna ruin these khakis.
Xtra_ToppingZ: I wouldn’t mind seeing that.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: me neither, but those shorts look cute, and I wouldn’t want to stain them if they were mine.
Snowy_Anchor: Yeah, appealing as that sounds, you don’t want to have to buy another pair to replace those.
Duh-Nuh: Couldn’t you just wash them?
Snowy_Anchor: You could, but it’s not worth the risk, especially if you have to wash them with something that might fade the colors.
Snowy_Anchor: Besides, I’d rather see her naked butt plopped right on the seat even more.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: God me too, I’m already wet just thinking about it.
Earn_Your_Stripes: lol I keep forgetting there’s women in here into this stuff. Two of them even!
Snowy_Anchor: Yup, me and Sheep. And I’ve got a Rainforest District in between my legs right now.
Xtra_ToppingZ: Unf, that’s hot.
With introductions out of the way, the antelope placed her phone on the counter, turning her front toward the bathtub to give her viewers a good look at her slim belly. She slid her hooves down the pale fur on her front until she reached the fly of her khaki shorts, grasping the zipper within her hooves and yanking it downward before unfastening the button up top. Putting a thumb within the waistline, she slipped her shorts down her thighs and let them fall the rest of the way past her calves onto the floor. Standing in her violet panties, Gazelle turned herself around to show the camera her behind with only the tip of the violet cloth sticking out the top of her crack underneath her short tail. She took a brief moment to move her hooves up the surface of her ample cheeks, pushing against them to show how much meat each side of her rear carried. Reaching the top of her buttocks, she slipped her thumb down the interior of her panties and pushed them downward, leaving the cream and gold fur of her backside completely exposed.
With nothing keeping her hindquarters concealed, Gazelle bent forward and grabbed her phone off of the counter, looking at the livestream to see that the chat was going crazy over the sight of her large posterior covering up her head up to her horns, a fact which she herself felt grateful for. Feeling somewhat frisky from all the attention, Gazelle reached one hoof back to her right cheek and spread it to the side, showing off the compacted gray crater of her anus. Letting go of her cheek, she began to type into the message field of the chat, all while swaying her hips from side to side in a provocative fashion.
Zuburu_22: Dear God, what an ass
Earn_Your_Stripes: Was gonna wait til she started ripping ass, but screw it; got a paw on my dick already.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: I’ve been rubbing my clit since the video started.
Duh-Nuh: Careful you don’t burn yourself out too quickly ;P
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: You kidding me? I can usually crank out 3 orgasms before her videos are over, this ain’t nothing.
Snowy_Anchor: 3? Pft, amateur. Try 5.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: Challenge accepted!
Xtra_ToppingZ: God, I want to feel that ass on my face.
Zuburu_22: It’s like a big fat heart under her tail. <3
Smelly_Ms_Thomson: Whew, spreading my cheeks like that kind of pushed me to my limit there. I almost lost control completely.
Snowy_Anchor: Unnnnf
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: Do want.
Earn_Your_Stripes: Shower us with your mess, Ms_Thomson!
Knowing she wouldn’t be able to last much longer, Gazelle put one hoof down on the toilet seat and eased her ample cheeks down, the excess girth of her behind spilling over the side of the seat from the force of the plastic pushing up against them. The seat gave her cheeks a slight spread down the middle, urging her asshole to yield the contents it had held back for so long now. Without any reservation, Gazelle took a deep breath and gave a slight push through her rectum, feeling the pocket of foul wind race to leave its confines.
Pluuuuuupprt
“Hoh!” Gazelle accidentally moaned before clasping a hoof to her mouth on reaction. She normally kept herself quiet during these shows, not making even the slightest groan to insure nobody recognized her voice was the same as the one who they heard on the radio and on stage over the years. The immediate relief she felt from letting out such a powerful blast of flatulence, and the intimidating sound it made amplified by the acoustics of the bowl, had made her lose control of herself for a brief moment. It took her several seconds to move her eyes back down to her phone, worried that she might look at the chat and see that someone had recognized her brief vocalizations.
Zuburu_22: Cripes, dat baritone
Xtra_ToppingZ: Think that might have been a 3 on the richter scale, lol
Snowy_Anchor: Welp, that’s one down.
Duh-Nuh: omg, you came already?
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: Dangit, I’m behind now! I’m close though, probably another minute or two for me.
Snowy_Anchor: Yeah, that little moan of hers did it for me. Sounded like that felt really good coming out~
Earn_Your_Stripes: I think that’s the first time we’ve heard her voice before. Usually it’s just soft grunts and stuff.
Smelly_Ms_Thomson: Ha ha, whoops! That was a little stronger than I was expecting. And yes, it felt VERY good to let that out all at once. My asshole it still shaking from the force of that, goodness.
Xtra_ToppingZ: Would you like me to lick it to help soothe it, Ms_Thomson?
Earn_Your_Stripes: I think the neighbors might have heard that — the fart, not the moan, I mean.
Following the relief of releasing such a loud and strong fart, Gazelle took solace in the fact that nobody had recognized her moan and connected it to the pop icon of Zootopia. She felt thankful that as attentive as her followers were, none of them were able to deduce her identity by one octave. With her nerves settled, Gazelle’s sphincter reminded her that while she’d experienced some relief from expelling her gas, she was far from completely empty. Keeping her eyes on her phone and watching her butt move as she repositioned herself, Gazelle took another breath and squeezed her stomach together as she exerted more force through her anus.
I've spent the last... I don't know, 3 or 4 weeks writing about Gazelle taking a dump while she has cameras in her toilet feeding the footage to an online account of hers so viewers can watch. What I initially panned to be a quick ten page story has escalated to a whopping 27 pages and 15K word count. I seriously don't know why I keep doing this to myself, but that's just how it is. I might end up cutting a fair portion of it after my proofreader gives his evaluation of it, but that's a bridge I'll cross later. Since it's going to take a while, I figured I'd leave you guys with not only a preview for the story, but also tell you that I might start uploading some quickies to my scraps folder in the meantime. Yeah, I actually wrote a couple drabbles that weren't several pages long just for practice, and they're kind of gathering dust, so I might as well do something with them.
For now, here's a quick look at what Gazelle's story is going to contain:
---
Pressing the button the instant the time showed 10:30, the button changed to a bright green and the words Live flashed across the top of the screen. A moment later, she saw the same sight as before, her midriff and everything below it from the side, and her chest from inside the bowl. A few seconds later, the busy chat jumped in activity, everyone in attendance greeting their beloved performer for the evening.
Xtra_ToppingZ: So, you still haven’t quite made it into space yet?
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: No, still working in accounting at the moment. I’m keeping an ear to the ground for any opportunity that lets me get a foot in the door to be an astronaut though. Hooves crossed! /)(\
Xtra_ToppingZ: /)(\
Earn_Your_Stripes: We’re rooting for ya. Hope you make it to the stars some day.
Duh-Nuh: Hey, look who just got here!
Snowy_Anchor: Our mistress hath arrived!
Zuburu_22: Pants unzipped.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: Same.
Xtra_ToppingZ: Same
Snowy_Anchor: I wasn’t wearing pants to begin with.
Earn_Your_Stripes: What are clothes?
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: They’re the things Smelly_Ms_Thomson’s wearing, and they’re cute! Love your top, “Troublemaker!” ;3
Xtra_ToppingZ: I’m more focused on the shorts she’s wearing. How are those things fitting around her massive butt?
Gazelle’s teeth sunk into her bottom lip in excitement upon reading how eager her followers were to see she, “Smelly_Ms_Thomson” had finally made it. She was even excited that they liked her outfit of choice. Even though she was itching to get started, she couldn’t resist the need to chat with her audience a bit before things got started.
Smelly_Ms_Thomson: Oh, you guys are so sweet! These aren’t even that nice of clothes, I got them for cheap at GoodWolf.
Zuburu_22: Hey, no worries; some clothes never go out of style.
Duh-Nuh: nothing wrong with GoodWolf, I shop there too. Helps me save money for more important things than wearing expensive trending clothing.
Snowy_Anchor: You mean like more porn?
Duh-Nuh: Well yeah, what’s more important than that?
Earn_Your_Stripes: I hear that!
Smelly_Ms_Thomson: lmao You guys crack me up. But speaking of crack, mine is BUSTING to let out what I’ve been holding in, so I’m gonna have to get started soon or I’m gonna ruin these khakis.
Xtra_ToppingZ: I wouldn’t mind seeing that.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: me neither, but those shorts look cute, and I wouldn’t want to stain them if they were mine.
Snowy_Anchor: Yeah, appealing as that sounds, you don’t want to have to buy another pair to replace those.
Duh-Nuh: Couldn’t you just wash them?
Snowy_Anchor: You could, but it’s not worth the risk, especially if you have to wash them with something that might fade the colors.
Snowy_Anchor: Besides, I’d rather see her naked butt plopped right on the seat even more.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: God me too, I’m already wet just thinking about it.
Earn_Your_Stripes: lol I keep forgetting there’s women in here into this stuff. Two of them even!
Snowy_Anchor: Yup, me and Sheep. And I’ve got a Rainforest District in between my legs right now.
Xtra_ToppingZ: Unf, that’s hot.
With introductions out of the way, the antelope placed her phone on the counter, turning her front toward the bathtub to give her viewers a good look at her slim belly. She slid her hooves down the pale fur on her front until she reached the fly of her khaki shorts, grasping the zipper within her hooves and yanking it downward before unfastening the button up top. Putting a thumb within the waistline, she slipped her shorts down her thighs and let them fall the rest of the way past her calves onto the floor. Standing in her violet panties, Gazelle turned herself around to show the camera her behind with only the tip of the violet cloth sticking out the top of her crack underneath her short tail. She took a brief moment to move her hooves up the surface of her ample cheeks, pushing against them to show how much meat each side of her rear carried. Reaching the top of her buttocks, she slipped her thumb down the interior of her panties and pushed them downward, leaving the cream and gold fur of her backside completely exposed.
With nothing keeping her hindquarters concealed, Gazelle bent forward and grabbed her phone off of the counter, looking at the livestream to see that the chat was going crazy over the sight of her large posterior covering up her head up to her horns, a fact which she herself felt grateful for. Feeling somewhat frisky from all the attention, Gazelle reached one hoof back to her right cheek and spread it to the side, showing off the compacted gray crater of her anus. Letting go of her cheek, she began to type into the message field of the chat, all while swaying her hips from side to side in a provocative fashion.
Zuburu_22: Dear God, what an ass
Earn_Your_Stripes: Was gonna wait til she started ripping ass, but screw it; got a paw on my dick already.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: I’ve been rubbing my clit since the video started.
Duh-Nuh: Careful you don’t burn yourself out too quickly ;P
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: You kidding me? I can usually crank out 3 orgasms before her videos are over, this ain’t nothing.
Snowy_Anchor: 3? Pft, amateur. Try 5.
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: Challenge accepted!
Xtra_ToppingZ: God, I want to feel that ass on my face.
Zuburu_22: It’s like a big fat heart under her tail. <3
Smelly_Ms_Thomson: Whew, spreading my cheeks like that kind of pushed me to my limit there. I almost lost control completely.
Snowy_Anchor: Unnnnf
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: Do want.
Earn_Your_Stripes: Shower us with your mess, Ms_Thomson!
Knowing she wouldn’t be able to last much longer, Gazelle put one hoof down on the toilet seat and eased her ample cheeks down, the excess girth of her behind spilling over the side of the seat from the force of the plastic pushing up against them. The seat gave her cheeks a slight spread down the middle, urging her asshole to yield the contents it had held back for so long now. Without any reservation, Gazelle took a deep breath and gave a slight push through her rectum, feeling the pocket of foul wind race to leave its confines.
Pluuuuuupprt
“Hoh!” Gazelle accidentally moaned before clasping a hoof to her mouth on reaction. She normally kept herself quiet during these shows, not making even the slightest groan to insure nobody recognized her voice was the same as the one who they heard on the radio and on stage over the years. The immediate relief she felt from letting out such a powerful blast of flatulence, and the intimidating sound it made amplified by the acoustics of the bowl, had made her lose control of herself for a brief moment. It took her several seconds to move her eyes back down to her phone, worried that she might look at the chat and see that someone had recognized her brief vocalizations.
Zuburu_22: Cripes, dat baritone
Xtra_ToppingZ: Think that might have been a 3 on the richter scale, lol
Snowy_Anchor: Welp, that’s one down.
Duh-Nuh: omg, you came already?
Sheeps_In_SPAAAACE: Dangit, I’m behind now! I’m close though, probably another minute or two for me.
Snowy_Anchor: Yeah, that little moan of hers did it for me. Sounded like that felt really good coming out~
Earn_Your_Stripes: I think that’s the first time we’ve heard her voice before. Usually it’s just soft grunts and stuff.
Smelly_Ms_Thomson: Ha ha, whoops! That was a little stronger than I was expecting. And yes, it felt VERY good to let that out all at once. My asshole it still shaking from the force of that, goodness.
Xtra_ToppingZ: Would you like me to lick it to help soothe it, Ms_Thomson?
Earn_Your_Stripes: I think the neighbors might have heard that — the fart, not the moan, I mean.
Following the relief of releasing such a loud and strong fart, Gazelle took solace in the fact that nobody had recognized her moan and connected it to the pop icon of Zootopia. She felt thankful that as attentive as her followers were, none of them were able to deduce her identity by one octave. With her nerves settled, Gazelle’s sphincter reminded her that while she’d experienced some relief from expelling her gas, she was far from completely empty. Keeping her eyes on her phone and watching her butt move as she repositioned herself, Gazelle took another breath and squeezed her stomach together as she exerted more force through her anus.
That chat is too proper and the typing is too good for a chat room. Though I suppose that helps to separate their culture from our own.
Thanks for pointing out the thing about that chat dialogue. I could possibly dumb it down and make it more crude to mimic online chatter, but I don't want it to come across like I'm trying too hard either. I'll at least give it another look and consider some alternatives.
Also, are those chat names a reference to anything in particular or are they kinda random? Cool either way.
The chat names are actually clues to who the characters actually are, as are their dialogue. I'm interested to see how many readers can figure out who they are.