Writing help needed
7 years ago
Hello there! I'm trying to get back into the swing of writing and have come to a part in my story where I'm not sure where to go. The basic premise of the story is a virus carried by anthros causes humans to mutate and transform. A human girl finds out as she tries to play a prank on her family that goes horribly wrong. She ends up spending the night with a childhood friend, who is an anthro. His instincts get the best of him and they get intimate, infecting her with the virus. Now they will have to deal with the aftermath as she changes into his breeding mate. Here's a link to what I have so far: https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....it?usp=sharing I've set it so anyone with the link can comment so any help is appreciated. Thanks!

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So far I love it! Maybe continue along as her fur grows in (if it does) and so forth. Detail how much her mind changes, how do other furs see her now? You said that any fur can smell the virus on her now, so does that mean she could walk around the fur district without fear of being a target of racial violence? Maybe have an encounter in a grocery store when she goes to buy things for her and Clyde for diner. Just some ideas.