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Fridge Logic, Questions, and Comments
6 years ago
Keep Your Promises, Especially To Yourself.
If at any point someone is reading a story by me and has a 'But wait, why didn't they just do this?' or 'Wait why did they do that' or in general have a question about an action or character...
Ask! ^.^
I love explaining the logic and ideas behind something, and spotting glaring flaws in my logic is a great way to help me improve as a writer.
Some writers can get a lil defensive about such things, and hey that's fine! You feel a need to protect your work, and I can respect that.
Someone just tossing insults would get a reaction like that from me, but if ya got a genuine question or comment I'm always happy to see em.
Though I will state, often times there is logic behind a strange decision or idea of a character in a story of mine that is not outright stated in the story. However, I am generally happy to explain that logic too.
And if I can't explain it and there's no good reason for it, Well that's a spot I need to improve next time
(Note, 'Seed missionary' is cringe-inducing and has numerous issues I am aware of, so maybe skip that one, I only leave it up as a reminder to myself I thought that shit was great when I put it out, so I need to improve keep improving. All other submissions are fair game.)
Ask! ^.^
I love explaining the logic and ideas behind something, and spotting glaring flaws in my logic is a great way to help me improve as a writer.
Some writers can get a lil defensive about such things, and hey that's fine! You feel a need to protect your work, and I can respect that.
Someone just tossing insults would get a reaction like that from me, but if ya got a genuine question or comment I'm always happy to see em.
Though I will state, often times there is logic behind a strange decision or idea of a character in a story of mine that is not outright stated in the story. However, I am generally happy to explain that logic too.
And if I can't explain it and there's no good reason for it, Well that's a spot I need to improve next time
(Note, 'Seed missionary' is cringe-inducing and has numerous issues I am aware of, so maybe skip that one, I only leave it up as a reminder to myself I thought that shit was great when I put it out, so I need to improve keep improving. All other submissions are fair game.)
One question though: why no football? I'm assuming that he doesn't get the same morning sleepiness as much thanks to the.... brain juice.... and he's already on the track team which would have training sessions, so it seems a bit odd.
Alright yes, I'm low key disappointed I don't get to see football players bouncing off him as he strolls down a field XD
Really the reason he's not on the football team in this story is for a few reasons. The largest of which is that both stories together only consist of about four or five days, even if he'd gone to the football coach the same day he spoke with his father, he'd likely still be sorting things out with the coach.
Them there's his personal preferences. Tobias was a firm built hoss boy even before this happened, and a strong track star would make at least a decent wide receiver with proper practice. I'd say he prefers just to not play football, likely because most of his interactions with the football team likely include Duke.
Though that DOES sound like a hilariously fun idea and I might include a football player in a future story now...
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I mean... for totes unrelated reasons