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Patch notes for A Prelude to Perversion Chapters 1-5
6 years ago
- The character David, who is originally namedropped as Andrew in chapter 1, is now named Andrew for continuity
- Capitalized the 'S' in all instances of the word 'Siamese' in Chapters 4 and 5
- Fixed the shower scene in Chapter 3 where Patrigue refers to a handjob as 'simulation' when if should be 'stimulation'
- Several instances across all chapters of missing short words such as 'or,' 'and,' and 'to.'
It's been a while since I looked at the previous chapters, and I wanted to reread them for maintaining continuity in Chapter 6. It turns out that I am not as good of a proofreader as I thought I was. These are all the mistakes I found looking back at them and I'll probably find more, but I decided to fix them now and share what I found.
As for Chapter 6, I promise I'm working on it and that it'll be out before the year ends. If I'm lucky I might even get Chapter 7 out before then as well (no promises).
- Capitalized the 'S' in all instances of the word 'Siamese' in Chapters 4 and 5
- Fixed the shower scene in Chapter 3 where Patrigue refers to a handjob as 'simulation' when if should be 'stimulation'
- Several instances across all chapters of missing short words such as 'or,' 'and,' and 'to.'
It's been a while since I looked at the previous chapters, and I wanted to reread them for maintaining continuity in Chapter 6. It turns out that I am not as good of a proofreader as I thought I was. These are all the mistakes I found looking back at them and I'll probably find more, but I decided to fix them now and share what I found.
As for Chapter 6, I promise I'm working on it and that it'll be out before the year ends. If I'm lucky I might even get Chapter 7 out before then as well (no promises).
wellifimust
~wellifimust
Ahhh man, those proofreading mistakes. Hate em. But it's great to see you're both getting better at them and are working on the next chapter. Been a long time coming, but I can wait as long as I need to. :D
