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STORY: Rewriting 'This War of Ours' to 'Under Eden'
5 years ago
Heii everyone!!
As some of my followers on Twitter know, I've recently decided to sit down and REALLY take writing seriously.
Some of you may have read my story "This War of Ours" (you can check out its folder of art and writing here- https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....is-War-of-Ours). It is a story of survivors in a conflict-ridden world, focusing on the two main characters Aelinore and Cross, a collie girl and human male. This War of Ours started as an exercise, just for fun, but since I created Aelinore and Cross I have become completely besotted with them, so much that I only ever seem to commission art of them and rarely any other characters of mine.
Now, I feel like it's time to be more serious and commit to telling their story, not just that but to formally publish it. As such, I have renamed the story Under Eden , and added more to the plot than just those two watching out for each other. Under Eden is still a war and survivor story, only this time I will be going more indepth into the world-- what are ATROS guns for example, and where did Cross come from? What was the horrific attack that Aelinore survived, and could it mean something more? It will be a story of war machines, fallen heroes, earth-deep secrets and the power of kinship, resilience and love.
I have already finished the Prologue and will be posting it here soon, both as a submission on FA and as a PDF available for download <3
Thank you for reading guys. I know writing and finishing a story will be a monumental task for me. It comes with a load of anxieties, fierce self-doubt and crippling feelings of vulnerability. But I've been writing and making stories longer than I have been drawing, so it truly means a lot to me. I hope you guys will enjoy it too <33
As some of my followers on Twitter know, I've recently decided to sit down and REALLY take writing seriously.
Some of you may have read my story "This War of Ours" (you can check out its folder of art and writing here- https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....is-War-of-Ours). It is a story of survivors in a conflict-ridden world, focusing on the two main characters Aelinore and Cross, a collie girl and human male. This War of Ours started as an exercise, just for fun, but since I created Aelinore and Cross I have become completely besotted with them, so much that I only ever seem to commission art of them and rarely any other characters of mine.
Now, I feel like it's time to be more serious and commit to telling their story, not just that but to formally publish it. As such, I have renamed the story Under Eden , and added more to the plot than just those two watching out for each other. Under Eden is still a war and survivor story, only this time I will be going more indepth into the world-- what are ATROS guns for example, and where did Cross come from? What was the horrific attack that Aelinore survived, and could it mean something more? It will be a story of war machines, fallen heroes, earth-deep secrets and the power of kinship, resilience and love.
I have already finished the Prologue and will be posting it here soon, both as a submission on FA and as a PDF available for download <3
Thank you for reading guys. I know writing and finishing a story will be a monumental task for me. It comes with a load of anxieties, fierce self-doubt and crippling feelings of vulnerability. But I've been writing and making stories longer than I have been drawing, so it truly means a lot to me. I hope you guys will enjoy it too <33
It will finally continue and better than ever!
I hope to read it all soon! I've been very curious about Aeli and her past.
Good to know we'll be getting many answers soon!
All these comments on wanting to read my story aaa ;; ❤️
Scenes are described perfectly, not too much detail, but also doesn't have a lack of description.
I can always picture the scenes in my head without the next scene messing anything up.
The caracters are awesome and unique, and those cute and cuddly scened with Aeri and Cross always bring a warmth to my heart.
Watching their slow and steady love grow is just makes me go "Dawwww"
Maybe we might get some art illustrations too :3