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5 years ago
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I'm so sorry for writing Ralts' backstory. As I was writing Ralts' backstory, I felt like it made for a good story/narrative, but I completely forgot to consider the tone of the story. I want this story to be happy and fun, and while some serious things will happen in any story, holy fuck, why did I put child abuse in this story?! What the fuck was I thinking?!?! I will soon be rewriting chapter 20 and chapter 21, and moving the originals to scraps.
(EDIT: This journal was previously called "I'm So Sorry", and the title was changed for accuracy.)
(EDIT: This journal was previously called "I'm So Sorry", and the title was changed for accuracy.)
Dravid3460
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Thanks for the reply. I don't HAVE to rewrite them, and if I were trying to write a more dark and serious story, there wouldn't be any issue with Ralts' backstory. To clarify, I'm rewriting the chapters because I personally dislike how dark and serious the backstory is. Fortunately, I don't think the general quality of the story will suffer at all from the changes.
