"You're worth nothing, thread snake! Squirm beneath my pawpads!"

I couldn't help myself; those first and last sentences called for a BDSM joke.

On topic:
You're willing to explore niche kinks with enthusiasm and show some creative spark. However, you could potentially branch out even further. You also could be a bit more careful when checking for spelling and grammatical errors. Lastly, your gallery could use some better sorting and categorization, especially for the stories that don't have tags in the thumbnail.

Aye, my grammar needs work indeed. I'll work on improving it. Thank you~

Ok, time for literally analysis:

First of all, I love all the themes you use, it's really exciting to see a prominent growth writer. That said, the way you elaborate the environment for your stories is really nice, you give the chance to actually imagine it.

As for format, I would recommend if instead of using left sided, you go for central, I think I would make reading so much easier. I also agree with Losstride when it comes to sorting and classification, having folder wouldn't be bad.

With that I conclude, if there's something else you want to ask feel free to do so, I'll always give an honest answer

I'll see how that works out for me, and I'll have a look at categorizing things as well. Thanks for the feedback~

Ok I am gonna judge you, I like your hyper story and the d.evolution, and for improve maybe the muscle and size?

Hrhr, always bigger. Yes, I'll see what thesaurus got for me when it comes to descriptors~

On the positive side:
The detail you write in is immense and you have a very good instinct for what works. Everything reads naturally, and even though i'm kinda biased in that your work is almost exactly in my perfect zone, I can appreciate the technical skill that goes into it, because it's at a high level. On top of that you're actually good at dialogue, which is a bit of a rarity on here. A lot of writers are content with just moans etc but you take the time to develop it further, which sets you apart (and firmly into the group of writers I enjoy).

On the negative side:
I'm a stickler for grammar, and you do use some rather questionable sentence structures at times.
I will also say (and I'll admit I'm picking at straws here) that you tend to focus on the process more than the results, and as a result you don't tend to vary the pace that much. Sometimes it's good to just slow it down and get a good look at the goods so to speak. Again though that's a small complaint cause the descriptions themselves are top notch

Perhaps its my native German that injects its own questionable structures into what I write, but either way, I'll try to improve it.
As for the process... I suppose its fair to say that I sometimes blow my load a little early - so to speak - which leaves me proverbially drained for the finale. But then again, there's always time to edit it later again.
Thank you though, and I'm glad you enjoy my writing nonetheless~

Hey Jagaman!

I'll start off with the biased stuff. I absolutely love how you frame growth and how you focus on the concept of big within your stories. There's something about the way you describe the scenes and what is happening to each character that is this roller-coaster of a ride that keeps escalating higher and higher.

Something I think is very impressive, is how you manage to keep the sexual tension and progression at an extremely high peak consistently through a story. However, this is a good Segway into one of my recommendations:

In speaking with you and reading your stories, you have really interesting worlds you have built things around, and I sometimes feel that you could add so much more dimension to the story or characters by dipping out of the sexual scenes into luls or troughs where we explore who these characters are. This sets up great contrast as well when your growth scenes take place - we can empathize just that little more with the character experiencing this.

If I could challenge you, try writing something soft and tender between a few characters that sit outside of a growth or sex scene. Another challenge maybe, is that a lot of your characters are very powerful - and oh boy is it sexy, but writing wise; it would be very interesting to see you play on the flaws of some of your characters personalities. Where does each character's moral compass point and why does it point that way? Is there something that is a sensitive topic? etc ...

(Please keep in mind your gallery is huge and I can't remember every detail, though this is what came to mind)

There is indeed a whole depth of character that is yet to explore. A part of a problem with the tier of character I usually employ is that their agency far far exceeds what I as a mortal could possibly fathom. I could only make guesses at what problems Coatl might face that actually would put him into a position where his morals, blue and orange as they might be, are questioned. But that makes it all the more interesting to explore, no?

You're a lot further along as an author than I am to be honest

What I like most. The way you can take absurdities and insane ideas and just roll them across the page in a way to flows cleanly and freely while being completely informative of what the reader needs to know. Something I am struggling with myself. It makes your stories not just fun to read, but really hard to -stop- reading.

Dislikes? Ummm...

Honestly, I think its more a preferences thing than an actual issue but... While the detail, of course, should vary in depth with minor topics receiving less wordage than more central portions of a story. Sometimes it does seem the lighter bits can get a smidge too light, and the deeper bits can get a little too deep. Also sometimes the rationing out of detail seems to see large amounts of detail fall in places I am a little thrown off by. This is also something I am struggling with, though usually, I err far more on too much in depth than not enough. You seem to have a better grasp on it than I do but then again...

As I said, this is more a personal preference and I don't think its an actual 'wrong'ness to correct exactly. Possibly considered, but not necessarily acted on

The ever returning bane of the pacing. I admit that I often go with "what feels right at the moment" which can also heavily depend on moods. That can very well lead to the less important things getting more attention, just because it tickles my fancy so much more at the time.
Either way, thank you~ I'll do my best to improve~