I Decided to do my senior project on a comic book (all senior projects require a product, this is my product. The projects also has to relate on your shops, and my shop is graphic arts so it's perfect)

All I need are some readers and for them to tell me if you are ever to buy this at some random store, how much would u pay? (real payment, nothing like 0.01, or 53234.00)

I also need a mentor and spend 10 hours with him/her. So i'm kinda hoping i can get a mentor in the cartooning business, if not i'm gonna have to ask a teacher who draws well (can't be my shop teacher) to be my mentor.

this is for a major grade, so if i fail, i'll never graduate, so i want anyone to tell me what i should do to make this comic better, and stuff that's wrong with it. If any of you guys help me i'll be forever great full. if you don't care than fuck off and don't waste my time. thank you

~Fox_Dreamz