I'm not happy with what I posted, I didn't like the story and where it started.

So I rewrote what I was going to make, it's around 12 pages now, which might be a mistake. However with what I learned from the first comic, I should be able to do it. It'll just take a while.
I'll reuse the image I'm removing, or remake it. I'm not too happy with the pose and the composition just feels off.

I know I'm a small creator, and no one really cares but I still feel that I need to explain what I'm doing. The comic will take a while to make and I'm sorry.