Writing Sample #1: Sample Dialog
5 years ago
Here is a small sample of my writing. This comes from a story I edited for a client -- but I largely rewrote it in the process.
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The two boys rushed their way through the great big yard. They cut through the grassy hills, heading for the street.
“Slowpoke!” teased Scuttle, looking back at Lucky.
“We’ll see about that!” called Lucky. “I’m not out of the race yet!”
Lucky pushed his legs to go faster. Even so, he was already starting to pant. Scuttle gave him a big smirk.
“Let me see you do your best!” Scuttle called back. “Then you can see how fast I really am!”
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The two boys rushed their way through the great big yard. They cut through the grassy hills, heading for the street.
“Slowpoke!” teased Scuttle, looking back at Lucky.
“We’ll see about that!” called Lucky. “I’m not out of the race yet!”
Lucky pushed his legs to go faster. Even so, he was already starting to pant. Scuttle gave him a big smirk.
“Let me see you do your best!” Scuttle called back. “Then you can see how fast I really am!”