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Jack and Cool's GPR: Review of Roomates
16 years ago
General
JackBond: Hello pr0n fans!
Omgsocool: And hello perverts of the world. Specifically the gay furry kind.
JackBond: Today we're going to review the pages of complication five's comic called "Eighteen"; made in 2004.
Omgsocool: Surprisingly, I never knew the maker of Sleezimon made this.
JackBond: Indeed, that happens to me all the time XP
Omgsocool: XD well then let's get this 5 year old comic started
Page 1 - 12:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2759269/
JackBond: Hmm, it's hard to rate this one because it's not really porn...
Omgsocool: I got a solution.
JackBond: What's that?
Omgsocool: How about we review the entire buildup as if it were one page. In this case it would be pages 1-12
JackBond: Alrighty!
Omgsocool: So go ahead and give your review of the buildup.
JackBond: Well it's a wonderful premise, of course. And I can totally imagine myself in Tos's position. It has a cute dose of drama, and ends with a sweet kiss. It could have ended here and I would have been satisfied.
Omgsocool: Indeed your right. It's nice to see the process of someone getting deflowered on their 18th birthday. but it's more fun to see what happened leading up to it.
JackBond: I rate the first 12 pages a 8.5/10... I think? o.o
Omgsocool: I'll match that and say 8.5
JackBond: So, page 13 then
Omgsocool: yep
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.5/10
Page 13:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763804/
JackBond: Obviously, the most prominent part of this page is the toe sucking. I don't really have a foot fetish, but that actually looks really cute to me. And I just make a :3 face whenever I see the affection on frames 1 and 2 XP
Omgsocool: Of course the toe sucking part is the main focus but i think it's suposed to be cute and not sexy. other then that good opener.
JackBond: I give it an 8.3/10
Omgsocool: I'll say 8/10
Ratings:
8.3/10
8.0/10
Page 14:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763809/
JackBond: It's heating up! I think comp_five did a great job with the lizard butt on the last frame. Buuut still no cock, soo XP
Omgsocool: XD you need your cock so bad don't ya
JackBond: I do~
Omgsocool: XD well anyway, I love stripping scenes. I also like the panel with the chest licking. ^^ i always liked that. And of course i love Tos's body.
JackBond: X3 I agree with that! I'll give that an 8.5/10
Omgsocool: And i will once again say 8/10
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.0/10
Page 15:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763817/
JackBond: I think the words "DING DONG" accurately describe this whole page..... And yet, with Tos's cock out, I can't stop staring at his chest... huh...
Omgsocool: Goes to show that cocks aren't everything huh. Well anyway. more stripping fun with the char Sonik but then of course DING DONG ruins it XD.
JackBond: I give this one an 8.3/10
Omgsocool: And i'll give it 7.5/10
Ratings:
8.3
7.5
Page 16:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763823/
JackBond: Dayum, I would love to come across a scene like that when I deliver pizza. That scene with Tos looking for money, is adorable! ^^
Omgsocool: Indeed. I'm surprised the pizza guy loves it but hey. It's a free gaydar XD.
JackBond: 8/10
Omgsocool: 7/10
Ratings:
8.0/10
7.0/10
Page 17:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763830/
JackBond: I actually commented on the page. I've eaten pizza in the nude. It's awesome X3. But you know what... it's even more awesome to see Tos eating pizza in the nude. I just... wish he put more detail into the cock D: Still, it's really sexy ^^
Omgsocool: I haven't eaten pizza in the nude but i think i did for something else that i don't remember. Anyway, good pic. After this, the comic stops slouching around and gets to the good stuff.
JackBond: 8.5
Omgsocool: 7.5
Ratings:
8.5/10
7.5/10
Page 18:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763835/
JackBond: Fox cock! Yay!... well actually, I still prefer staring at Tos. X3 That pose on the last frame is awesome as well~
Omgsocool: Yeah to bad that Sonik's cock is not as good looking XD. Either way, now it's getting good.
JackBond: Hahaha, poor Sonik... anyway, I give this a 8.5/10
Omgsocool: 8/10
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.0/10
Page 19:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763847/
JackBond: Comp_five did especially well on the anatomy on this page. Here comes some oral! I bet it's going to be long and drawn out and full of yummy angles and poses o3o
Omgsocool: Indeed. I've talked with you about this outside of reviews that 18's style and Comp_5's style today are completely different. Either way. This is hot. Love all the pannels.
JackBond: 8.5/10... again o3o
Omgsocool: I'll say 8.5 as well
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.5/10
Page 20:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763861
JackBond: Just one frame this time. I do like the poses and expressions in this. It seems kind of tangible... which is really good when it comes to porn.
Omgsocool: I see what you mean. Since it's one frame, It's easy to see the hotness of this page. Love this pose and Sonic is absolutely eating that thing
JackBond: Well... it's not exactly huge... which... >.> don't tell anybody, but that's another way I can relate to him.........
Omgsocool: *laughs*
JackBond: Anyways, I give this an 8.5............ again...
Omgsocool: And i'll say 8.5 with you................again
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.5/10
Page 21:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770512/
JackBond: Oooh penis vein. I leik those. Hahaha, ironically, I discussed a couple of pages back that I would be quick to cum on my first time... and so it happens here! XD the only thing I don't get is the sound of ejaculation being "glalomp glalump!" XP... the next frame makes up for it though. His "EEEEEEEeeeeeee..." face. X33
Omgsocool: ^^ EEEEEEEeeeeee indeed lol. Anyway. Other then another page coming up, this is my favorite page. Again, i just love all the panels.
JackBond: 8.8/10
Omgsocool: 9/10
Ratings:
8.8/10
9.0/10
Page 22:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770520/
JackBond: Tos seems very satisfied ^^ Good thing Sonik isn't unhappy that Tos already cummed XP
Omgsocool: Indeed. The first pannel is awesome for Tos's happy face. and of course, Tos promises that there is more were that came from ^^
JackBond: 8.2/10
Omgsocool: 8/10
Ratings:
8.2/10
8.0/10
Page 23:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770529/
Omgsocool: Oh boy we are getting geared up for some deflowering ^^.
JackBond: Mmm, if only I were light enough to be carried like that X3. Tos ish all cute in frame 2 ^^
Omgsocool: And in the third pannel. We get to see handcuffs XD
JackBond: Hehe, kinky huh? X3
Omgsocool: Yeah ^^ he doesn't use them but it's nice to see he has some.
JackBond: 8.4/10
Omgsocool: 7.5/10
Ratings:
8.4/10
7.5/10
Page 24:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770543/
JackBond: Don't go slow! POUND HIS ASS! >:3 Sonik's cock is looking better here ^^
Omgsocool: XD. anyway. I agree with you on your last comment. Also, I like the first pannel with the fingering.
JackBond: It's actually kind of hard to tell that he is fingering at all o.o
Omgsocool: Well he's either fingering the lube or just spreading it on his hole.
JackBond: 8.5/10
Omgsocool: 8/10
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.0/10
Page 25:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770557/
Omgsocool: The first mistake of the comic. As pointed out by the first comment on the page
JackBond: Aww, it's really cute ^^ I like the comforting frames :3. Tos works with either colored cock.
Omgsocool: Of course. i just like green better lol. 8/10
JackBond: 8/10
Ratings:
8.0/10
8.0/10
Page 26:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770564/
JackBond: Awesome. Just awesome. Tos's face in every frame is just really hot. Now if only I could hear him moaning too. X3
Omgsocool: Gotta love deflowering. And insertion scenes as well. God that's hot.
JackBond: 8.7/10
Omgsocool: 8.8/10
Ratings:
8.7/10
8.8/10
Page 27:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770576/
JackBond: That kissing scene, is probably my favorite moment of the whole comic... I bet it's yours too? ;3 You have to like the naughty faces, and new positions X33
Omgsocool: Well, close but no cigar, It's not my favorite but my 3rd favorite behind the ending of the oral scene
Omgsocool: but anyway, Great page. all 3 pannels are great
JackBond: 9/10
Omgsocool: 9/10
Ratings:
9.0/10
9.0/10
Page 28:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770594/
JackBond: Mmm, that first pose looks really romantic <3 Hehehe, shooting cum on Tos's body is the hottest way to finish ^^
Omgsocool: Not to mention, Shooting cum on Tos's body that's already stained with his cum.......win. As for the other poses, all of them are great.
JackBond: Indeed ^^
JackBond: 8.6/10
Omgsocool: 8.5/10
Ratings:
8.6/10
8.5/10
Page 29:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770604/
JackBond: Yummm, afterglow. Isn't it so relaxing? Yet, I can't believe they kept it up for 3 whole hours! Goood morrningggg, Tos!~ XP
Omgsocool: I love the last three pannels. especially the last one. So sensual looking.
JackBond: Nothing like waking up with someone you love... naked :3
Omgsocool: I know ^^
JackBond: 8.6/10
Omgsocool: 8.5/10
Ratings:
8.6/10
8.5/10
Page 30:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770617/
JackBond: Teeheehee, morning wood is always fun ^^ but what happened in the last frame I wonder? X3
Omgsocool: ^^ indeed it is. I love the last pannel cause it's both a good oral and self pleasuring scene, it's a getting caught scene. Now this is my favorite page.
JackBond: XD
Omgsocool: lol
JackBond: 8.7
Omgsocool: 9.1
Ratings:
8.7/10
9.1/10
Page 31:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770637/
JackBond: Hahaha, where's Bowser Jr. to be all show-offy, even when strangers are watching? XD BUT, who said this can't turn into a threesome? O3o
Omgsocool: I know. This could have been a clue for a sequal. Even the comments demand one
JackBond: Sadly, I don't think comp_five would be up for it D:
Omgsocool: Either way, it's good the way it is
Omgsocool: would be nice to see the interupting lizard naked through ^^
JackBond: Agreed. 7.7/10 (For plot twist XP)
Omgsocool: And i say 7.5 for hopes of naked lizard ^^
JackBond: X3
Ratings:
7.7/10
7.5/10
JackBond: So that's the review! We'll be sure to have another one on the sequel if there is one!
Omgsocool: Now for our ratings. Jack.......bring out the all mighty calculator
JackBond: *Beeping robot sounds*
JackBond: The grand average is!...
Omgsocool: *drum roll*
JackBond: 8.315!
Omgsocool: Wich rounds to 8.3
Omgsocool: Now for the bonus points. from 1-5 how much do we like this comic?
JackBond: 4.5 of course XP
Omgsocool: I'd have to tone it down and say 3.5
JackBond: D: 10:39 PM
Omgsocool: Too much horsing around and not enough sex for me
JackBond: XD 10:39 PM
JackBond: X3, you just need your cock
Omgsocool: Nope i just need my well.............everything really
JackBond: XD
JackBond: Hahaha
Omgsocool: So anyway, the averages for the extra points
JackBond: Well.... my calculator keeps saying 6.25, but I'm smart enough to know that it's 4 even o3o
Omgsocool: So that gives it a extra .4 giving us a grand total of 8.7
JackBond: Tadaa! ^^
Omgsocool: So there you go ladies and.......oh scratch that Gentlemen, Comp_5's 18
JackBond: Hahaha~ we hope you enjoyed this review, lovelies!
And as always this review is our opinion entirely so no bringing the holy rath of the Sleezimon fans.
JackBond: Good evening, and happy cocks everybody! X3
Omgsocool: With plenty of cum stained chests! ^^
Omgsocool: And hello perverts of the world. Specifically the gay furry kind.
JackBond: Today we're going to review the pages of complication five's comic called "Eighteen"; made in 2004.
Omgsocool: Surprisingly, I never knew the maker of Sleezimon made this.
JackBond: Indeed, that happens to me all the time XP
Omgsocool: XD well then let's get this 5 year old comic started
Page 1 - 12:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2759269/
JackBond: Hmm, it's hard to rate this one because it's not really porn...
Omgsocool: I got a solution.
JackBond: What's that?
Omgsocool: How about we review the entire buildup as if it were one page. In this case it would be pages 1-12
JackBond: Alrighty!
Omgsocool: So go ahead and give your review of the buildup.
JackBond: Well it's a wonderful premise, of course. And I can totally imagine myself in Tos's position. It has a cute dose of drama, and ends with a sweet kiss. It could have ended here and I would have been satisfied.
Omgsocool: Indeed your right. It's nice to see the process of someone getting deflowered on their 18th birthday. but it's more fun to see what happened leading up to it.
JackBond: I rate the first 12 pages a 8.5/10... I think? o.o
Omgsocool: I'll match that and say 8.5
JackBond: So, page 13 then
Omgsocool: yep
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.5/10
Page 13:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763804/
JackBond: Obviously, the most prominent part of this page is the toe sucking. I don't really have a foot fetish, but that actually looks really cute to me. And I just make a :3 face whenever I see the affection on frames 1 and 2 XP
Omgsocool: Of course the toe sucking part is the main focus but i think it's suposed to be cute and not sexy. other then that good opener.
JackBond: I give it an 8.3/10
Omgsocool: I'll say 8/10
Ratings:
8.3/10
8.0/10
Page 14:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763809/
JackBond: It's heating up! I think comp_five did a great job with the lizard butt on the last frame. Buuut still no cock, soo XP
Omgsocool: XD you need your cock so bad don't ya
JackBond: I do~
Omgsocool: XD well anyway, I love stripping scenes. I also like the panel with the chest licking. ^^ i always liked that. And of course i love Tos's body.
JackBond: X3 I agree with that! I'll give that an 8.5/10
Omgsocool: And i will once again say 8/10
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.0/10
Page 15:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763817/
JackBond: I think the words "DING DONG" accurately describe this whole page..... And yet, with Tos's cock out, I can't stop staring at his chest... huh...
Omgsocool: Goes to show that cocks aren't everything huh. Well anyway. more stripping fun with the char Sonik but then of course DING DONG ruins it XD.
JackBond: I give this one an 8.3/10
Omgsocool: And i'll give it 7.5/10
Ratings:
8.3
7.5
Page 16:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763823/
JackBond: Dayum, I would love to come across a scene like that when I deliver pizza. That scene with Tos looking for money, is adorable! ^^
Omgsocool: Indeed. I'm surprised the pizza guy loves it but hey. It's a free gaydar XD.
JackBond: 8/10
Omgsocool: 7/10
Ratings:
8.0/10
7.0/10
Page 17:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763830/
JackBond: I actually commented on the page. I've eaten pizza in the nude. It's awesome X3. But you know what... it's even more awesome to see Tos eating pizza in the nude. I just... wish he put more detail into the cock D: Still, it's really sexy ^^
Omgsocool: I haven't eaten pizza in the nude but i think i did for something else that i don't remember. Anyway, good pic. After this, the comic stops slouching around and gets to the good stuff.
JackBond: 8.5
Omgsocool: 7.5
Ratings:
8.5/10
7.5/10
Page 18:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763835/
JackBond: Fox cock! Yay!... well actually, I still prefer staring at Tos. X3 That pose on the last frame is awesome as well~
Omgsocool: Yeah to bad that Sonik's cock is not as good looking XD. Either way, now it's getting good.
JackBond: Hahaha, poor Sonik... anyway, I give this a 8.5/10
Omgsocool: 8/10
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.0/10
Page 19:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763847/
JackBond: Comp_five did especially well on the anatomy on this page. Here comes some oral! I bet it's going to be long and drawn out and full of yummy angles and poses o3o
Omgsocool: Indeed. I've talked with you about this outside of reviews that 18's style and Comp_5's style today are completely different. Either way. This is hot. Love all the pannels.
JackBond: 8.5/10... again o3o
Omgsocool: I'll say 8.5 as well
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.5/10
Page 20:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2763861
JackBond: Just one frame this time. I do like the poses and expressions in this. It seems kind of tangible... which is really good when it comes to porn.
Omgsocool: I see what you mean. Since it's one frame, It's easy to see the hotness of this page. Love this pose and Sonic is absolutely eating that thing
JackBond: Well... it's not exactly huge... which... >.> don't tell anybody, but that's another way I can relate to him.........
Omgsocool: *laughs*
JackBond: Anyways, I give this an 8.5............ again...
Omgsocool: And i'll say 8.5 with you................again
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.5/10
Page 21:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770512/
JackBond: Oooh penis vein. I leik those. Hahaha, ironically, I discussed a couple of pages back that I would be quick to cum on my first time... and so it happens here! XD the only thing I don't get is the sound of ejaculation being "glalomp glalump!" XP... the next frame makes up for it though. His "EEEEEEEeeeeeee..." face. X33
Omgsocool: ^^ EEEEEEEeeeeee indeed lol. Anyway. Other then another page coming up, this is my favorite page. Again, i just love all the panels.
JackBond: 8.8/10
Omgsocool: 9/10
Ratings:
8.8/10
9.0/10
Page 22:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770520/
JackBond: Tos seems very satisfied ^^ Good thing Sonik isn't unhappy that Tos already cummed XP
Omgsocool: Indeed. The first pannel is awesome for Tos's happy face. and of course, Tos promises that there is more were that came from ^^
JackBond: 8.2/10
Omgsocool: 8/10
Ratings:
8.2/10
8.0/10
Page 23:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770529/
Omgsocool: Oh boy we are getting geared up for some deflowering ^^.
JackBond: Mmm, if only I were light enough to be carried like that X3. Tos ish all cute in frame 2 ^^
Omgsocool: And in the third pannel. We get to see handcuffs XD
JackBond: Hehe, kinky huh? X3
Omgsocool: Yeah ^^ he doesn't use them but it's nice to see he has some.
JackBond: 8.4/10
Omgsocool: 7.5/10
Ratings:
8.4/10
7.5/10
Page 24:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770543/
JackBond: Don't go slow! POUND HIS ASS! >:3 Sonik's cock is looking better here ^^
Omgsocool: XD. anyway. I agree with you on your last comment. Also, I like the first pannel with the fingering.
JackBond: It's actually kind of hard to tell that he is fingering at all o.o
Omgsocool: Well he's either fingering the lube or just spreading it on his hole.
JackBond: 8.5/10
Omgsocool: 8/10
Ratings:
8.5/10
8.0/10
Page 25:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770557/
Omgsocool: The first mistake of the comic. As pointed out by the first comment on the page
JackBond: Aww, it's really cute ^^ I like the comforting frames :3. Tos works with either colored cock.
Omgsocool: Of course. i just like green better lol. 8/10
JackBond: 8/10
Ratings:
8.0/10
8.0/10
Page 26:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770564/
JackBond: Awesome. Just awesome. Tos's face in every frame is just really hot. Now if only I could hear him moaning too. X3
Omgsocool: Gotta love deflowering. And insertion scenes as well. God that's hot.
JackBond: 8.7/10
Omgsocool: 8.8/10
Ratings:
8.7/10
8.8/10
Page 27:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770576/
JackBond: That kissing scene, is probably my favorite moment of the whole comic... I bet it's yours too? ;3 You have to like the naughty faces, and new positions X33
Omgsocool: Well, close but no cigar, It's not my favorite but my 3rd favorite behind the ending of the oral scene
Omgsocool: but anyway, Great page. all 3 pannels are great
JackBond: 9/10
Omgsocool: 9/10
Ratings:
9.0/10
9.0/10
Page 28:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770594/
JackBond: Mmm, that first pose looks really romantic <3 Hehehe, shooting cum on Tos's body is the hottest way to finish ^^
Omgsocool: Not to mention, Shooting cum on Tos's body that's already stained with his cum.......win. As for the other poses, all of them are great.
JackBond: Indeed ^^
JackBond: 8.6/10
Omgsocool: 8.5/10
Ratings:
8.6/10
8.5/10
Page 29:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770604/
JackBond: Yummm, afterglow. Isn't it so relaxing? Yet, I can't believe they kept it up for 3 whole hours! Goood morrningggg, Tos!~ XP
Omgsocool: I love the last three pannels. especially the last one. So sensual looking.
JackBond: Nothing like waking up with someone you love... naked :3
Omgsocool: I know ^^
JackBond: 8.6/10
Omgsocool: 8.5/10
Ratings:
8.6/10
8.5/10
Page 30:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770617/
JackBond: Teeheehee, morning wood is always fun ^^ but what happened in the last frame I wonder? X3
Omgsocool: ^^ indeed it is. I love the last pannel cause it's both a good oral and self pleasuring scene, it's a getting caught scene. Now this is my favorite page.
JackBond: XD
Omgsocool: lol
JackBond: 8.7
Omgsocool: 9.1
Ratings:
8.7/10
9.1/10
Page 31:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2770637/
JackBond: Hahaha, where's Bowser Jr. to be all show-offy, even when strangers are watching? XD BUT, who said this can't turn into a threesome? O3o
Omgsocool: I know. This could have been a clue for a sequal. Even the comments demand one
JackBond: Sadly, I don't think comp_five would be up for it D:
Omgsocool: Either way, it's good the way it is
Omgsocool: would be nice to see the interupting lizard naked through ^^
JackBond: Agreed. 7.7/10 (For plot twist XP)
Omgsocool: And i say 7.5 for hopes of naked lizard ^^
JackBond: X3
Ratings:
7.7/10
7.5/10
JackBond: So that's the review! We'll be sure to have another one on the sequel if there is one!
Omgsocool: Now for our ratings. Jack.......bring out the all mighty calculator
JackBond: *Beeping robot sounds*
JackBond: The grand average is!...
Omgsocool: *drum roll*
JackBond: 8.315!
Omgsocool: Wich rounds to 8.3
Omgsocool: Now for the bonus points. from 1-5 how much do we like this comic?
JackBond: 4.5 of course XP
Omgsocool: I'd have to tone it down and say 3.5
JackBond: D: 10:39 PM
Omgsocool: Too much horsing around and not enough sex for me
JackBond: XD 10:39 PM
JackBond: X3, you just need your cock
Omgsocool: Nope i just need my well.............everything really
JackBond: XD
JackBond: Hahaha
Omgsocool: So anyway, the averages for the extra points
JackBond: Well.... my calculator keeps saying 6.25, but I'm smart enough to know that it's 4 even o3o
Omgsocool: So that gives it a extra .4 giving us a grand total of 8.7
JackBond: Tadaa! ^^
Omgsocool: So there you go ladies and.......oh scratch that Gentlemen, Comp_5's 18
JackBond: Hahaha~ we hope you enjoyed this review, lovelies!
And as always this review is our opinion entirely so no bringing the holy rath of the Sleezimon fans.
JackBond: Good evening, and happy cocks everybody! X3
Omgsocool: With plenty of cum stained chests! ^^
