PackRat Ship Comic Script.
5 years ago
In The Beginning!
Page: 11.)We open on a dockyard in what appears the late 18th century in England. We see the crew loading on supplies and passengers.
2.)Among them is a fairly tall and broad figure wearing a fancy cloak. Their face is completely hidden by a high collar and a wide brimmed hat.
3.)Once aboard the tall entity ask one of the crewmen if his quarters are prepared and if there's any entertainment onboard.
Stranger: "I believe I have a cabin reserved for this voyage? And, that there will be nightly... entertainment!"
4.)The crewman points to the stranger's rented cabin next to the Captain's own cabin. And answers the final question by pointing upward to the upper decks to another crewmate. A young man in his late teens to early 20s, skinny possibly malnourished, and wearing old clothes about 2 sizes too big for his frame.
5.)The tall stranger thanks the crewman and tosses him a gold coin from within his cloak and retreats into his cabin.
Page: 21.)Inside the cabin we see the stranger is PackRat wearing an 18th century version of his normal uniform. Inside the room is a bunk with all the proper beddings, 2 locked trunks/wardrobe-like chest, an end table/nightstand with a single unlit candle, a writing desk against a wall below a single port window that looks out over the sea, a hook in the middle of the ceiling with an unlit oil lantern hanging from it, on the wall opposite to the porthole window is an old oval shaped mirror with a shaving setup mounted bellow it, and finally a single large rum barrel with a bowl with citrus fruits in it.
2.)PR goes to his bunk where his trunks of belongings were left stacked. Opening one its full of weapons from all over the world. This is to show that PR is on a mercenary mission most likely for hire by some royalty during a war.
Page: 31.)Later that night after eating his dinner (served through a small slot in the door to his cabin) PR is ready for his bit of entertainment he was promised on this trip.
2.)He puts on his less ornate robes (a kilt, silk gloves, a fabric version of his mask, simple sandles for his feet) and an amulet that caste a glamour spell over him to help hide his strange appearance from the normies of the crew. We the audience can see his true form, but the other characters in the crew will only be able to see him as a large burly man in period piece clothing.
3.)It's dark out on deck as all the crew are in their bunks below deck and only the man in the crow's-nest and the man at the wheel. But, there's a small light from a lantern shinning behind an area boxed off by crates and rum barrels tied down to the deck and railings.
4.)PR in his simple disguise approaches the area and peers over the makeshift barrier.
Page: 41.)What he sees is the young crewman that the other one had pointed out earlier giving 2 other crewmen hand jobs and a 3rd a blowjob.
2.)PR ducks back down, clears his throat, and speaks.
PR: "Once you gentlemen are done, I would like to have the company of our little entertainer for the rest of the night in my quarters!"
3.)He turns to head back to his cabin when he hears a voice come over the barrier.
Cabin Boy: "I'll be there in a bit!"
4.)PR returns a peek over the barrier to see the young crewman taking 3 loads from the 3 other men into his mouth.
Page: 51.)We see the young man spitting out the semen over the railing, while holding his hand out, as the men are pulling up their trousers, and tossing him a few small denomination coins into his outstretched hand.
2.)The men climb out from behind the barrier and head below decks to go to bed as the young man comes out and approaches PR.
3.)He speaks to PR as they walk back to his cabin.
Cabin Boy: "My services are a couple coppers for me to use one hand, double that for both, a single silver for my mouth, and for everything it'll be 2 silvers, sir! Anything more I doubt you can afford it!"
PR: "Don't worry about that. I'm going to pay you well for your... services!"
4)They enter the cabin and the door slams shut. (This is from the outside)
Page: 61.)Inside the cabin PR slams the door and locks it.
PR: "I'm sorry, but I can't afford any... disturbances! I greatly value my privacy!"
2.)He turns around to see the young man standing next to PR's bunk.
PR: "So, how do you feel about become my personal... bedwarmer? For the rest of this journey at least?"
Cabin Boy: "Oh, I do not know, sir. I only do this for extra money for my family back home, protection in case of pirate attack and the other crewmembers who'd harm me otherwise, and extra rations when things get really tough... and, I'm afraid a single customer I'd be doing a disservice to myself. I don't think you can afford my sole services..."
3.)PR opens his 2nd trunk and inside it is 100's of gold coins, jewelry, gems, silverware, fine silks, bits of fancy clothing, wheels of cheese, and bottles of fine wines.
PR: "I believe I can pay for your time and company!"
Cabin Boy: "But... but... but, the rest of the crew? They need me and my services! They'll go crazy without me! And, if they knew about all this, they'd kill us both and take all this treasure!"
PR: "Oh, don't worry about that... I can handle them and the Captain knows me and my abilities! I'm sure he can smooth things over with the crew!"
4.)PR slams the trunk shut, grabs the young man, lifts him up by his waist, and tosses him on the bunk.
PR: "I normally prefer the company of a woman, but these maritime superstitions are so..." He trails off.
5.)The man lying on the bed looks up at PR and ask:
Cabin Boy: "What are you going to do to me, sir?"
PR: "Only the best I can!"
Page: 71.)PR rolls the Cabin Boy over on the bed and onto his belly.
Cabin Boy: "Wait! I've not done this before, sir!"
2.)PR pulls down the Cabin Boy's trouser and starts rubbing his buttock.
PR: "I would say I will be... gentle... But it has been a long time! A couple days now since I had company in bed! You see this mission I'm on wouldn't allow me to bring any of my companions along with me and I get so... lonely!"
3.)PR takes one hand and grabs his dinner plate from his bunk's end table.
4.)PR: "Also, I prefer if you are fully aware of what you will be in for on a near nightly basis!"
Page: 81.)Taking his hand away from the Cabin Boy's buttocks he wipes some grease off the plate and onto his index and middle fingers.
PR: "I can promise you this though... You will not go hungry, your family back home will be provided for, and you will remain safe as my companion!"
2.)The Cabin Boy looks over his shoulder blushing and nods.
Cabin Boy: "I'll do it, sir!"
3.)PR sticking his fingers into the Cabin Boy's anus.
PR: "Good! GOOD!"
Page: 91.)The Cabin Boy bites down onto PR's bunk's pillow and lets out a wining whimper.
PR: "Relax, my boy! Or, this will be very painful!"
2.)PR pulls his fingers out and lifts up the Cabin Boy by his waist.
Cabin Boy: "What are you doing now, sir?"
3.)R walks them over to the rum barrel in the corner of the room and pushes the fruit bowl off it to the floor with his tail.
PR: "The bed isn't the right place for this! Also, I got a bum knee so I need a standing position!"
Page: 101.)PR drops the Cabin Boy over the top of the barrel like an old sack of potatoes.
Cabin Boy: "Oof... How? How did you move that bowl without touching it?"
PR: "Do not ask too many questions, my boy! It's not important and will only scare you more!"
2.)PR positions himself behind the splayed Cabin Boy and uses his tail to pull down his kilt to free himslef.
PR: "Now, relax and try not to scream... it hurts my ears!"
3.)PR presses his already hardened member up to the young man's rear.
Cabin Boy: "Ohhh..."
Page: 111.)PR pushes hard and he only gets about an inch or 2 inside.
Cabin Boy: "It feels weird!"
PR: "It's only the beginning!"
2.)PR pushes more and is about half way in now.
Cabin Boy: "IT HURTS!"
PR: "It is to be expected! You're still a virgin in this area! I'll just speed this part up!"
3.)PR pulls back a little bit. There's a little staining of blood on his shaft but nothing major.
PR: " Hold your breath and do not scream I repeat!"
Page: 121.)PR slams himself all the way into the Cabin Boy so hard he is lifted off the barrel from the sudden gut bulge. The Cabin Boy lets out the deep breath he'd taken with no sound but a ragged hiss.
2.)PR quickly grabs a piece of fruit from the spilled bowl on the floor with his tail and sticks it into the young man's open mouth.
PR: "That was close! You are quite tight back here!"
Page: 131)PR starts slowly thrusting in and out. The Cabin Boy lets out squeals like an animal while clenches at his abdomen with his hands.
2.)PR picks up speed and force. We see the gut bulge of popping the buttons on the Cabin Boy's shirt.
3.)PR is now pulling almost half way out before slamming back in again with each thrust. A single thin red streak is rolling down the young man's inner thigh.
4.)Close up of the Cabin Boy's face as tears run from his eyes and they start to glaze over. He isn't squealing anymore but starting to moan and grunt now.
5.)PR uses his tail to start rubbing the man's own now hardening member.
PR: "Starting to except it now? Good!"
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1.)PR grips the young man's member and squeezes it while slamming into him harder and harder.
2)PR's strange penis's base is starting to swell making it harder to push it in and out.
PR: "OH! IT'S COMING! BRACE YOUESELF!"
3.)PR's bulbus glandis pops in and out
4.)He forces it in one last time before stopping all thrusting with the full length of his phallus buried inside the Cabin Boy.
5.)We cut to an X-ray showing the inside of the Cabin Boy's colon as PR ejaculates, his penile bards pop out, and sting the walls ling the intestine.
Page: 151.)Close up of the Cabin Boy's face as his eyes rollback, tears and drool streaming down his face.
2.)Shot from between their legs showing a single globule of white fluid is sliding down the barrel trail from the penis of the young man.
3.)The Cabin Boy collapses cross the barrel limply. His gut now even more bloated and bulging than before.
Page: 161.)PR stands there, no longer holding onto the man's hips, his hands on the back of his own head.
PR: "That was a great! Once the swelling goes down, I'll be ready to go again! You should be feeling really good by now! I'm told I have an effect akin to the best Opium or the strongest of alcohols!"
2.)PR still standing there starts to get impatient. He starts to try pulling out.
"Ok, let go already!"
3.)He tugs harder and we see the man's anus stretching and straining as the bulbus glandis works its way out. The Cabin Boy starts to murmur again.
Page: 171.)The swollen mass pops free and the high pressure built up inside the man's bowels releases streams of semen speckled with blood. The young man releases a muffled shriek.
PR: "Oh my that was quite a mess!"
2.)PR completely pulls out and we see the results of his premature removal from the young man before his knot and barbs could retract. It's red, bruised, and starting to swell. The hole is so stretch out you can see several inches inside of it. Semen is still leaking out of it in thick streams down both legs and the side of the barrel.
PR: "Damn, I'm afraid I've might've ruined you already?"
Page: 181.)PR is bent down looking at his handiwork. The Cabin Boy lifts up his head and looks over his shoulder and spits out the piece of fruit stuffed in his mouth and says.
Cabin Boy: "Please, sir... do it again!"
2.)PR standing back upright with a shocked look in his eyes.
PR: "You are an incredible specimen!"
3.)PR returns to his position behind the young man and taking hold of him again by his waist.
PR: "This trip is going to be so much fun with you, my boy!"
Page: 191.)We cut to the next morning with PR awake still setting on his bunk smoking a pipe. While the Cabin Boy, soaked in sweat, is lying asleep in a puddle of semen on the floor next to the rum barrel.
PR: "I feel like having eggs and bacon for breakfast! I will order you something as well...
2.)Cut to a close up of the Cabin Boy's semen coated and bloodied anus.
PR: "...you're going to need your strength for tonight!"
3.)We see PR getting up from his bunk and looks at his handiwork.
PR: "You are going to need to clean this mess up!"
4.)Pulling the Cabin Boy's cloths off and throwing them out the port widow.
PR: "But, first we need to get you some new clothes!"
Page: 201.)From here on each panel is a different time or day. And, with each time skip we notice small changes with the Cabin Boy's appearance. He's looking healthier and more effeminate. This one is the Cabin Boy painfully on his hands and knees scrubbing the floor in his cabin while now wearing only a maid's bonnet, apron, and stockings. While PR is setting at the desk staring at the young man's ass.
2.)Day 3. Now, we see a time later they're both changed into different clothes. The two of them together on the bow's deck looking out over the sea or that's what it'd look like from behind, but PR has the Cabin Boy pulled in front of him and has his hand down inside the Cabin Boy's trousers and is fingering him till he ejaculates himself. Might use an X-ray do show this internally.
3.)Day 6. We just to nighttime and the two are back in the cabin. The Cabin Boy's upper boy is sticking out of the port window, his legs are resting bend under him on the writing desk with his rump hanging off of it, and PR is railing him from behind.
4.)Day 15. Now, they're on the stern of the ship. PR has the Cabin Boy leaning backwards over the railing, is half way inside him, and giving him a gentle 2 finger handy.
Page: 211.)Day 21. They're in the crow's nest. PR is setting with his legs dangling and the Cabin Boy is facing him, and riding him and using the railing of the crow's next to hang on.
2.)Day 25. The Cabin Boy has noticed he's growing breast and that his nipples are starting to leak a bit of fluid while washing off after another night of breeding. His lips are filling out as well. Any body hair he might've had before is starting to fall out.
3.)Day 28. They're in the cabin again. PR's removed the oil lantern from the hook in the ceiling and has the Cabin Boy tied up nude hanging from it now. The young man's legs are tied bent up to his chest with his arms tied behind his back. PR is standing behind him ready to penetrate and is holding s candle poring melted wax onto the young man's back and buttocks.
Page: 221.)Day 30.(early morning) PR and the Cabin Boy are just doing doggy style sex in his cabin when they're interrupted by pirates attacking the ship.
2)Day 30.(afternoon) PR has allowed himself to be captured and is tie-up along with the Captain, his officers, and the surviving crewmen to the mass. They're all horrified and forced to watch as the pirates are looting the ship. PR's annoyed watching as the Cabin Boy is being gangbanged by the pirates,
3.)Day 30.(evening) Before leaving the ship one of the pirates notices the amulet around PR's neck and tries to take it.
4.)Day 30.(night) PR's killed the pirates and reclaimed all the goods taken and even take what was on the pirate's ship.
5.)Day 31. The crew are all celebrating. PR is helping the Cabin Boy bath in a wooden barrel, but through an X-ray section we see PR is also screwing him through a knothole in the side of the barrel.
Page: 231.)Day 35. PR is walking away from his handiwork. The Cabin Boy is left worn-out bent over a rum barrel and a single flower stuck in his ass.
2.)Day 37. The Cabin Boy is on his knees, mouth open in front of PR sitting in his chair in his cabin waiting for PR to finish.
3.)Day 40. The Cabin Boy has noticed his hips are too wide and his ass too thick to fit into his pants and he's got to wrap his chest as he's about a B-cup now.
4.)Day 42. PR's setting in his desk chair and has the Cabin Boy bent over his lap and is sodomizing him with a golden scepter.
5.)Day 44. PR is lying in his bunk as the Cabin Boy is riding him cowgirl style and PR is massaging the young man's chest and milk is leaking from them.
Page: 241.)Day 47. The ship is a day's journey from reaching shore and PR and the Cabin Boy are celebrating by doing it on the ship's figurehead. They're doing it doggie style and PR's trying to give the young man a reach around but his penis and testicles are shrunken and atrophied now.
PR: "Sorry, about that! I guess breeding you like a woman has convinced your body that you are one!"
Cabin Boy: "Just keep going I'm almost there, sir!"
2.)The ship is docking and PR is in his cabin changing out his leisure clothes into his public traveling cape and hat. The Cabin Boy is in there with him and is trying to fit into his normal clothes but they no longer fit thanks to the changes to his body. He can no longer button up his shirts or pull his trousers up past his hips.
PR: "Having trouble with that, now are you? I think I might have something you can wear now!"
3.)The final panel we see PR back in his fancy cape and hat holding the door to a carriage open as a team of crewmen are loading up his 2 trunks onto the back of the carriage, and the Cabin Boy is about to get into the carriage dressed as a woman now.
THE END...
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