I'm curious to know how many of you have read the story, and what you think of it?
It will be part of a much larger story that I'm still writing. There are already three more chapters that I'm preparing to release.
And I know that the story still have some flaws, but it's actually the first time I have written anything of significance. That, and also English isn't my first language. I've only had some very basic English at school (which was over 30 years ago). The rest is self-taught. But I am doing my best, and I have some great people helping with correcting the mistakes. :)