A quick question.
4 years ago
Hey guys, I wanted to ask you all a quick question. I've noticed that you guys commented and fav'ed my first story, Beerus: God of Growth, but when I uploaded Rouge and the Crescere Sapphire and Emile's 20th Birthday, no one seemed to care that much. So I'm curious to ask: What made you guys love my first story so much? I ask this because I want to improve as a writer for my future stories, so any criticism would be nice. Please let me know what you like, and what I should improve upon.
That being said, I really like your writing. I enjoy that you're not afraid to go into crushy stuff too. I don't really have much criticism though, to be honest. I'm sure there's some stuff to talk about but I just can't think of it right now...
I do love your writing and telling a story as a whole. You keep up the great and work.