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Explicitly Fatal Language in Vore
4 years ago
I just released a story called the Cozy Bunny Inn. It's a vore story about two cute guys having sex, then one digesting the other. The premise is not very different from a lot of vore stories here.
Except that it uses explicitly fatal language.
Rather than 'being digested', the characters die. Rather than a belly 'churning' the prey, the belly is killing the prey.
I've never really felt the need to write a journal before, but I have decided to do so for this one. I am not entirely sure why. I think it is probably because I am aware that this is language which a lot of voraphiles don't like, and can draw a lot of ire.
I started writing this story knowing that was the case, and making a decision to use that language anyway. In fact, I wrote three notes to myself at the top of the story, to reference, which were thus.
1: Tone must, as much as possible, be playful and light despite the harshness of the language in the story itself. This is to give an air of casualness in this world, and attempt to instill the idea that death via digestion is a completely normal, if particularly lewd, thing that everyone accepts as the norm.
2: The sex and vore in this story is to be consensual, albeit influenced by alcohol, and reminiscent of more ‘normal’ drunken hookups. This again will help get across the casual ‘no big deal that people die in other people’s guts’ tone that I’m looking for.
3: Find a way to insert little hints/clues/indicators into the story, that the elf is actually quite powerful. Powerful people being digested by less powerful people is hot. Also helps enforce the tone of consensual-ness if the elf is considered able to handle himself, and getting digested by his own choice.
(I dunno if I fulfilled number 3 that well, but heck it, at some point you gotta stop staring and editing and just upload the damn thing.)
As you may have been able to deduce from the above notes, I wanted to fully embrace the fantasy aspect of this story. Vore is inherently unrealistic, which happily gives authours and artists plenty of room to experiment with theme, content and tone including a world where death is no big deal, and a family can run an Inn, routinely offer themselves to get digested by their patrons and somehow never run out of staff. Don't think too much about it! Enjoy it for what it is!
I don't want to disappoint the vore fans that prefer the more euphemistic language in their content, but this is where my muse led me for this story particularly and I guess I just felt the need to put my thoughts down on text because I know this theme is one that can draw many negative reactions.
Who knows. I'm probably wrong and no one that reads the story will think that it's a big deal at all. But if you wanna ask any questions about it or anything, feel free to do so here.
Except that it uses explicitly fatal language.
Rather than 'being digested', the characters die. Rather than a belly 'churning' the prey, the belly is killing the prey.
I've never really felt the need to write a journal before, but I have decided to do so for this one. I am not entirely sure why. I think it is probably because I am aware that this is language which a lot of voraphiles don't like, and can draw a lot of ire.
I started writing this story knowing that was the case, and making a decision to use that language anyway. In fact, I wrote three notes to myself at the top of the story, to reference, which were thus.
1: Tone must, as much as possible, be playful and light despite the harshness of the language in the story itself. This is to give an air of casualness in this world, and attempt to instill the idea that death via digestion is a completely normal, if particularly lewd, thing that everyone accepts as the norm.
2: The sex and vore in this story is to be consensual, albeit influenced by alcohol, and reminiscent of more ‘normal’ drunken hookups. This again will help get across the casual ‘no big deal that people die in other people’s guts’ tone that I’m looking for.
3: Find a way to insert little hints/clues/indicators into the story, that the elf is actually quite powerful. Powerful people being digested by less powerful people is hot. Also helps enforce the tone of consensual-ness if the elf is considered able to handle himself, and getting digested by his own choice.
(I dunno if I fulfilled number 3 that well, but heck it, at some point you gotta stop staring and editing and just upload the damn thing.)
As you may have been able to deduce from the above notes, I wanted to fully embrace the fantasy aspect of this story. Vore is inherently unrealistic, which happily gives authours and artists plenty of room to experiment with theme, content and tone including a world where death is no big deal, and a family can run an Inn, routinely offer themselves to get digested by their patrons and somehow never run out of staff. Don't think too much about it! Enjoy it for what it is!
I don't want to disappoint the vore fans that prefer the more euphemistic language in their content, but this is where my muse led me for this story particularly and I guess I just felt the need to put my thoughts down on text because I know this theme is one that can draw many negative reactions.
Who knows. I'm probably wrong and no one that reads the story will think that it's a big deal at all. But if you wanna ask any questions about it or anything, feel free to do so here.
Whatastandupguy
~whatastandupguy
I think the way you treated it is an interesting concept! Something that we normally consider as being very serious being handled in an extremely casual manner is unique and fun.
Archie
~arrathdhron
OP
Thank you! There's definitely content out there which emphasizes fatality in vore other than just this story. But I think a large amount of it tends to have the prey as unwilling. Using fatal language along with very willing prey and teasey predators just seems much less common to me, and was a fun combo to explore.
Whatastandupguy
~whatastandupguy
For sure! There’s many ways to handle explicitly fatal vore, but this is for sure one that’s less common. Creative scenarios are a lot of fun!
