Just Moved
Posted 9 years agoHello all.
I finally got my new apartment and settled in. It was rough prepping everything these past few months. As such I have had little time to write. I hope to chug out the final chapter to The World Aflame this month. Have a great day folks.
I finally got my new apartment and settled in. It was rough prepping everything these past few months. As such I have had little time to write. I hope to chug out the final chapter to The World Aflame this month. Have a great day folks.
Chapter 18 Delay
Posted 10 years agoDear readers,
Just an update on my sordid tale, work progresses slowly unfortunately due to various other projects and just general life. I am hoping to have 18 up for you guys before the holidays kick in full swing. Thanks for your patience so far, and have a great week.
Just an update on my sordid tale, work progresses slowly unfortunately due to various other projects and just general life. I am hoping to have 18 up for you guys before the holidays kick in full swing. Thanks for your patience so far, and have a great week.
Chapter 10 Redux
Posted 10 years agoI was looking over chapter 10, and as much as I liked what I did, it was lacking a critical amount of detail concerning the Aviseryl. This makes the latter chapters a bit confusing, especially concerning Arith and Selena. Once I post chapter 14: Revelation, I'll be reduxing 10 and posting it next. Hopefully things will be a bit more clear and concise with the Aviseryl culture from here on out.
Onwards to chapter 11
Posted 10 years agoWell friends the redux is finally done and I have to say I really like where the story is going now. I hope you all agree and as I move forward into the future chapters this style will only improve further. Now on to chapter 11 folks, Hermano. Happy Sunday!
Underestimated it...
Posted 10 years agoWell four chapters done and it's already the 6th. As I was looking over the chapters I realized there was so much more I needed to amp up and correct that it ended up taking 5-7 hours per story to redux it. I grievously underestimated the time it would take. If all goes well I might be able to crank out 3 more by the end of the week, but I learned my lesson about deadlines for this story. Stay tuned and happy Thursday!
Metro...I mean The World Aflame Redux!
Posted 10 years agoGreetings fellows. I have been reviewing my work having had significantly more free time with my new job to relax and decided there is much more work to be done. I will be removing chapters 1-9 and resubmitting them once more. There were numerous grammatical errors and quotes that just didn't really pop as I had intended them to when I first began writing this epic tale. I'll be using a new game engine and better physics...i mean correcting these errors and uploading the newly improved chapters by Wednesday 05AUG2015 at the latest. Stay tuned and happy weekend to all.
The World Aflame Update
Posted 10 years agoWell after 3 years of life getting in the way I have finally resumed work on " The world aflame " series beginning foremost with Chapter 10: Prophecy. If all goes well I'll post this long overdue chapter by the end of this week! Huzzah!
Number 10: Prophecy
Posted 13 years agoThe next submission for my story is in progress and should hopefully be up soon friends.
A bit of Order
Posted 14 years agoHere is a list of story line progression for you all.
1) Ghost
2) The Vulpis
3) The Call to War
4) Path to Clarity (in progress)
5) The Damin (in progress)
6) Dos Gatos
7) What Can in Matter Lie...
8) Lust, Love, and Regret
9) Faith and Hope
10) TBA
I'll get 4 and 5 done soon. Hope this helps everyone.
1) Ghost
2) The Vulpis
3) The Call to War
4) Path to Clarity (in progress)
5) The Damin (in progress)
6) Dos Gatos
7) What Can in Matter Lie...
8) Lust, Love, and Regret
9) Faith and Hope
10) TBA
I'll get 4 and 5 done soon. Hope this helps everyone.
The World Aflame
Posted 14 years agoGood day to you friends. A few things to note here. First, I have removed " N Terminus" and "Liberate en Mortis" as they had no real bearing on the actual story line. If anyone is still wanting a copy of those feel free to contact me and I can send you the original document. Secondly, I know some of you are excited to read on, but I really should start from the beginning and then continue on from " Faith and Hope". There is a good amount of background I need to provide to really get this story moving so hang in there friends.
New direction
Posted 16 years agoI have noted that with my constraints for time, I won't really have much of a choice but to start form the beginning and simply begin posting chapters of the books. Hopefully this will allow reader feedback and give me a good sense of what to change/ expect for the coming chapters to be a bit more in depth or attention getting.
Absence
Posted 16 years agoI have not been on nor have I written anything recently. I'm hoping to get back to writing and finally finish up part 2 of my short clip of the world aflame. I might put that aside and work on something else. I think at this point time will tell.
Work in progeress
Posted 16 years agoApril 11, 2009
Still working on my next submission. With college as a formidable block to my writing things have been slow. I'll have my next piece posted hopefully by tonight if not by tomorrow night.
Still working on my next submission. With college as a formidable block to my writing things have been slow. I'll have my next piece posted hopefully by tonight if not by tomorrow night.
Third Submission
Posted 16 years agoMarch 23, 2009
Well, I finally posted an actual piece from my book. I don't really have a fan following, but it's out there being read hopefully. I'll soon see what everyone has to say. I'll keep browsing and commenting in the mean time.
Well, I finally posted an actual piece from my book. I don't really have a fan following, but it's out there being read hopefully. I'll soon see what everyone has to say. I'll keep browsing and commenting in the mean time.
Browsing
Posted 16 years agoMarch 22, 2009
I decided to look around and post a few random comments while I conceive of my next submission. Found some really amazing pictures and added a really well drawn dead space picture to my favorites. Still writing for now, and will hopefully have another submission by the end of today.
I decided to look around and post a few random comments while I conceive of my next submission. Found some really amazing pictures and added a really well drawn dead space picture to my favorites. Still writing for now, and will hopefully have another submission by the end of today.
Second Submission
Posted 16 years agoMarch 21, 2009
Still nothing much exciting to report on my progress. Got a favorite out of the blue surprisingly so far, and I have just posted another story. I feel a bit more confident about this second submission. I tried to take a different perspective and ideal set for characters. Its not as long, but perhaps it will have more of a kick to my readers. I browsed around at the random art I could find and commented on a few for fun. I'm really impressed at the amount of talent I have seen in just a few pages of submissions and can't wait to see some more in the coming days.
Still nothing much exciting to report on my progress. Got a favorite out of the blue surprisingly so far, and I have just posted another story. I feel a bit more confident about this second submission. I tried to take a different perspective and ideal set for characters. Its not as long, but perhaps it will have more of a kick to my readers. I browsed around at the random art I could find and commented on a few for fun. I'm really impressed at the amount of talent I have seen in just a few pages of submissions and can't wait to see some more in the coming days.
Liminality
Posted 16 years agoMarch 20, 2009
Not much yet as of today. Obtained on watch for another Sl friend. Still waiting on comments for my first submission, but I think it would be best to continue posting for now. I feel in a sort of transitory state, a sort of liminality if you will. I"ll write more in the following days.
Not much yet as of today. Obtained on watch for another Sl friend. Still waiting on comments for my first submission, but I think it would be best to continue posting for now. I feel in a sort of transitory state, a sort of liminality if you will. I"ll write more in the following days.
First Submission
Posted 16 years agoMarch 20, 2009
I place my first random story up with a bit of difficulty, but found the process rather simplistic. I modded my profile a bit and added a few watches. Hopefully more watches will follow and a few constructive comments will be tacked on the story next time i check in.
I place my first random story up with a bit of difficulty, but found the process rather simplistic. I modded my profile a bit and added a few watches. Hopefully more watches will follow and a few constructive comments will be tacked on the story next time i check in.
Initial thoughts and reactions.
Posted 16 years agoMarch 19, 2009.
So I got my account up and running and I decided to take a look at what there was to do here. I had heard about fur affinity from a good friend of mine on Second Life, and decided to check it out. I have little knowledge of the site, and hope to find out a bit more of what this is all about and perhaps I'll post a few of my insane novel ideas here for peer editing and commenting. I'll write more when i discover more.
So I got my account up and running and I decided to take a look at what there was to do here. I had heard about fur affinity from a good friend of mine on Second Life, and decided to check it out. I have little knowledge of the site, and hope to find out a bit more of what this is all about and perhaps I'll post a few of my insane novel ideas here for peer editing and commenting. I'll write more when i discover more.
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