I just posted a story I was told would never been a good RP, but was a good story. I was wondering if I could get some feedback from others?

Well I'm off again. Back to the wonderful world of basic training. On the bright side of things. I only have five more weeks left before I"m done with the hard part. So wish me luck and I hope to see you all again soon.

To Everyone that know me. I ship out tomorrow to basic training at ft Jackson. I hope to see you all soon and wish me luck.